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Lost Memories OOC

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MasterLink742

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  • I have the opening finished, and I'm kinda disappointed with it... :/
    Either way though, it'll have to do... I won't be posting until I finish Link's part. I am NOT gonna get ninja'd.

    I hate this so much. I have the perfect picture in my head. But I don't have the words to describe it...
     

    CyBeastSaber

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  • I have the opening finished, and I'm kinda disappointed with it... :/
    Either way though, it'll have to do... I won't be posting until I finish Link's part. I am NOT gonna get ninja'd.

    I hate this so much. I have the perfect picture in my head. But I don't have the words to describe it...

    Hahaha... Take your time. You are the GM after all... we have to wait patiently for you even though in reality we are impatient people. XD I'm sure you'll work it out and if not, that's why I'M here.... joking joking. :P I half arse most of the time so that's partially why I'm so undependable.
     

    MasterLink742

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  • The post is going up now. The start thing is horrible and I hate it with every fiber of my being, but it'll have to do.

    The other part I think turned out quite well.
     

    MichaelaTheUchiha

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  • I went to sleep, and I wake up to this.

    I'll try to get my post up ASAP, but I'm a bit hungry, so I think I'll eat breakfast first.

    Also, I'm the worst SU writer in the world. Just to warn you. I'll also be fairly awkward with first posts and all.
     

    A Monocled Hawk

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    Rather random of you but I'll answer that to the best of MY knowledge. xD

    Basically... Review what the other people have posted before you and see what emotions/actions they are doing. Take note of this as you write about how your character is seeing it as well as your interaction with the current event/situation. Do also take note that you cannot read people's minds so when noted by italics, which is more commonly used for when someone is talking to themselves in their heads, you probably won't know what they are thinking unless they actually say something except for the few silent moments on their part. So just try to flow with how everyone has written their posts (it tends to revolve around crap-loads of reading so be prepared xD). Adding some descriptive words about the environment at the time can also perk up your post as in a realistic sense, people tend to miss out on most details save for the more observant people. All in all... it's about flowing. Yeah, I ended up ranting... Shoot me. xD

    Okay so.... we can take my sample I wrote up there as an example. So my character is staring out to the ocean where we 'supposedly' drop from. Your 'character' as finally emerged from the water and makes their way to the beach. You do whatever it is you do to get there, swimming fast or taking a slow pace, and when you get to the beach, you can rest or lay down on your back or pick your nose, it's all up to you as the writer. Then you see my character staring out over into the ocean and you decided you want to talk to them since they are the only other person, other than you, that is there. You walk over descriptively or as fast as you'd like and upon reaching their location. You initiate a chat log which would lead to the other person posting a reply to your chat. Something like that. Try to catch details as much as you can to give it a visual sense, since I, in my opinion, would rather see something colorful and/or descriptive (I think there IS a limit to being extremely descriptive but large amounts never hurt anyone 8D) then something bland and lacking in imagery. You want to catch people's interest in your writing and if you dazzle them, hell that's a bonus. It all comes with practice and reading other people's posts. They can really give you a good idea how to write a storm occasionally as well as sentence structuring or even descriptive words you've never used before.

    Oh hell... I ranted EVEN MORE. *O*

    I do believe this was directed at me..so..er, that's actually not what I meant. D:

    No I feel all bad 'cause you had to write all that up.
     

    IDoLikeMudkip

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  • Its post whenever your up. But only if it pertains to you. Take what previous people wrote, and if you would be included within that dialog or action take that into account in your post. Is that more like what you wanted?
     

    CyBeastSaber

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  • I do believe this was directed at me..so..er, that's actually not what I meant. D:

    No I feel all bad 'cause you had to write all that up.

    Hahaha.... Well then.... you have officially LOST me in your previous post. XDDDD Ah well. :3

    @Link:
    You know wut! I'm just gonna use my SAMPLE! Since it pretty much has everything in it... Just gotta alter some junk in it. :C
     

    A Monocled Hawk

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    Its post whenever your up. But only if it pertains to you. Take what previous people wrote, and if you would be included within that dialog or action take that into account in your post. Is that more like what you wanted?

    Yeah that's what I meant, thanks.


    @CyBeast-
    Then my work here is done. :'P
    / shot

    No, I kid, I kid. I should have been more specific in my question, it's my fault.
     

    pikakip

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  • *_*

    Ehhh 3 pages in 2 days.

    Anyway, I'm back, and I'll have a post up later today.

    I rather think that Jenna will like this world....

    It could be because she's a-female-mage-bad@ss-who-acts-like-robin hood-but-only-to-help-herself


    Also, Link?

    You can't have my cookies. I ate them in advance.
     

    MichaelaTheUchiha

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  • Sorry, Link, I have no cookies except months old ones. But you can have them if you like.

    Sorry it took so long for me to post; it ends up that after breakfast, I had to go and become a pack mule for my mum. And I think my post length was beaten by Hawk and Cy. ;~;

    Edit: My word count is 1,260. Hawk's is 1,306. Cy's is 1,595.

    Cy wins! xD
     

    CyBeastSaber

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  • Sorry, Link, I have no cookies except months old ones. But you can have them if you like.

    Sorry it took so long for me to post; it ends up that after breakfast, I had to go and become a pack mule for my mum. And I think my post length was beaten by Hawk and Cy. ;~;

    Edit: My word count is 1,260. Hawk's is 1,306. Cy's is 1,595.

    Cy wins! xD

    lol.... A pack mule for your mom.... I'm one for my grandma. xDDD Lot's of produce in the garden. :3

    Heh.... 1,595.... You counted!? O.o

    Hahaha... You and your sister are the complete opposite of me and mine. 8D Oh and I did mention getting wet (6th paragraph). : D I was just somewhat dried up from the sun.

    Hurrah! The silence has been broken.
     
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    MichaelaTheUchiha

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  • I used MS word. I didn't count. xD

    Oh, really? ...Well, it doesn't really matter now. xD We should totally team up; melee with magic(that has training in martial arts)? Either that, or I can team up with Sky(IU)...
     

    CyBeastSaber

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  • I used MS word. I didn't count. xD

    Oh, really? ...Well, it doesn't really matter now. xD We should totally team up; melee with magic(that has training in martial arts)? Either that, or I can team up with Sky(IU)...

    Oh haha. Well I wasn't really worried about word count or anything since I was writing it on here. Personally, I don't care who I team up with. We are rather lacking in ranged specialists if you ask me We actually have a good balance of magic/ranged users so that is fine. I have a premonition that SelenaStar wants to team with me. xDDD
     

    MichaelaTheUchiha

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  • Oh haha. Well I wasn't really worried about word count or anything since I was writing it on here. Personally, I don't care who I team up with. We are rather lacking in ranged specialists if you ask me We actually have a good balance of magic/ranged users so that is fine. I have a premonition that SelenaStar wants to team with me. xDDD

    I usually write my things here too, unless I get worried mum is going to turn off the computer and ruin all of my work. xD

    All the girls should band together, lol. xD
     
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