I somehow felt like posting two maps of mine...
i know that a lot of people call me the best mapper but i think compared to the latest map of MASTEROFPUPPETS that i rated 10/10 these two are boring, so i want to know what to improve them
Map Name: Route 26
Game: FireRed
Hack: Legend of Fenju - Gaoya
Comments: Nvm... you enter at the left (from route 25) and leave it at the bottom right (you get to route 27 there)
The cave is *drums* the gemstone forge
Map Name: Route 27
Game: FireRed
Hack: Legend of Fenju - Gaoya
Comments: You enter at the top (Route 26) and leave it at the bottom (a semi big town is there)
I love your maps neti! I've never seen a mountainous map from you before. It just goes to show that your great at all types of mapping.
first map
vegitation: 9.5/10 Alright this is your strong point. but you should try to add verey sparce grass in the rocks.
vegitation suggestions: take the smallest type of grass (that is not the ground tile) and put it on the top layer maybe, not a lot to do here.
Shape: 9/10 I love the way it forces the player to wind his way through the first part and I love the way that he has other pathes he can take. but in some places it is to thin by about one block.
Shape suggestions: make it the slightest bit wider in a few places.
first apperance:9/10 this part looks good. it one flaw. you'd need to put a mountain in the middle of the first part where it is a jungle for this to improve.
first apperance suggestions: put a mountain in the first part.
ingame play:8.5/10 this part is the hardest to do. you need to make the player do things. jump ledges cross rivers that kind of stuff.
ingame play suggestions: adding a mountain in the first part would really help with this.
final rating: 9/10
second map
vegitation:8/10 looks good in most places but can use touchup on the grass in the middle.
vegitation suggestions: make some layers be grass and that thing about the small grass could help here too.
Shape: 9.5/10 the shape is awesome!
Shape suggestions:nothing really.
first apperance:9/10 this is the kind of map that makes the onlooker say "WOW!" and then "I wonder if it is possible to get through." and then he/she traces his/her finger through the map and is even more amazed that it works.
first apperance suggestions: add a few side craters maybe.
ingame play: 8.5/10 all rock maps don't do well here... though congrats yours is the best rock map I have ever seen for this category. anyways the small grass thing would really help and the craters too.
ingame play suggestions: use the small grass on top of the rocks and make some craters to the sides maybe add ledges.
final rating: 8.75/10