Takanushi, it is offical. You can not RP. You fail to notice subtle details that even a first grader with no reading experience would spot.
First of all. As I, and others have said before. Grammar is your friend, not your enemy. Practice proper grammar and you'll do wonders in RPs, choose not to and you'll be lucky if somone talks to you on an instant messanger or over PM.
Second, get the person's NAME right. I can't count how many times HARU's name has been said on that thread, and this one, and yet you still call him KERU. Who in hell's good name is KERU? If you're going to talk about someone, get their name right, or you'll end up confusing everyone else first, and then yourself, untill you look like the biggest idiot this planet has ever seen. If you don't already.
Third. Read the entire post through! don't just skim over it! you're obviously not that good yet! Once you can get to where you dont need to read every other word naturally to know what's going on, then, and only THEN can you do that. ThatInsaneKid said that TREVOR'S IQ was 129. BLAKE said HERS was 98. He did, in no way, say she was smart, infact, he proved she is actually rather dull, considering the IQ of most 16-30 year olds have an IQ of about 100-120.
You may want to get some Ice to go with that Burn, along with some good RP skills, otherwise I have a feeling you wont last long here. At all.