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MISFITS [OOC]

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Clain
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    Okay, completed mine (above). :)

    I decided to make him outright sociopathic for my amusement... How will he react with other characters now...? XD

    Edit: fixed some things in history
     
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    Strikit

    Procrastinator Extraordinaire
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  • Name: Ethan Sarvais

    Gender: Male

    Age: 23

    Appearance: Ethan's dark chocolate brown hair does as it wishes. It has been cut so that it is long enough to have a mind of its own, but not quite long enough to go past his ears. When the sun hits it at just the right angle, it appears to be black. His eyes are a light grey color and far wiser than they once were, though they still retain a certain level of the arrogant haughtiness that prevailed in his youth. They contrast with his tanned skin, from working outside for hours a day with his Pokemon. As a result of the same, he is well muscled and acclimated to extensive physical activity. Ethan's favorite shirt is still a dark grey one with an smokey abstract Gyarados design, as it has been since he was young, though it is a different one since then, naturally. He stands at six feet even, but isn't very intimidating; his expression is soft and gentle, and his temper is slow to ignite.

    His wardrobe generally consists of black or white tanks, fairly baggy shirts of various colors, jeans for casual occasions, and cargo pants when he plans to go training. Ethan's shoes contrast heavily from one purpose to another. He has reasonably clean black tennis shoes for the every day, and plain black boots when he trains. They're thick soled, scuffed, and highly funtional.

    When the roleplay begins, Ethan will be wearing the aforementioned Gyarados shirt over a black undershirt, dark khaki cargo pants, the boots, and a short sleeved khaki vest-style jacket with several pockets. There are six on the front, each embroidered with a name in a certain color. The first says Verde in a soft green; the second, Flare in flame red; the third, Maverick in a light blue; the fourth, Kodona in silver; the fifth, Oliver in a creamy color; and the sixth, Calix in lilac purple. On his head he will be wearing a black bandana in the sweatband fashion, with the Sarvais family crest embroidered in gold thread.

    Personality:
    Though he tries not to be, Ethan has a tendency to be proud, arrogant, and over confident. In his youth these qualities prevailed over all others to the extreme. Since then he has matured considerably, but there's still a hint of the old haughtiness every now and then, particularly in battle. He has learned a respect for his Pokemon and he never asks more of them than they are capable of delivering. This does not mean he does not push them; he just doesn't expect them to exhaust themselves. His best mate in the entire world is Verde, his Butterfree. He takes pride in their bond, as well as her training, seeing as he has been the one presiding over her training for the last decade.

    Somewhat stoic, Ethan isn't the type to gush emotions out into the open where anyone can see them. On the other hand when he cares for someone he always assures that they know it. He is very hardworking and will push his body to the physical limit, though he is expert at figuring out when his Pokemon need rest. His aspirations are to bring the Sarvais family name to the highest glory he can. When he was young his father told him to make the family look good, and he intends to make that happen. As much as his father has expressed disappointment in him throughout his lifetime, Ethan always strives to make him proud. The latest blemish on the Sarvais name hasn't reached his father's ears yet, and he never intends to tell him if he can help it. Instead he wants desperately to make up for it, one way or another.

    History: Ethan grew up with his mother and father in Canalave City, where his father owned several ships. Seeing as Canalave is a hub of trade they made a fair deal of money, ascertaining that they never wanted for anything. Being an only child Ethan was spoiled beyond what he ought to have been and given anything he asked for, whether it was essential to his happiness and wellbeing. The family owned a pet Glameow - or more accurately, Ethan's mother coveted a very fat and aggressive Glameow that she insisted was a family pet. Though he never liked it, when he was young Ethan would take it out into the front yard and train it to attack trees and such. That didn't go so well, as it was too fat to move quickly, but it sparked his interest in eventually building a Pokemon team.

    When he was ten Ethan's father's business went under, quite literally; a massive population increase of Wailmer caused the sea to become saturated with the spherical fish Pokemon. One by one they sank the Sarvais' ships, along with their evolution, Wailord. With nothing left for them in Canalave they moved to Sandgem. Ethan neither liked nor disliked the move; he never really got along with kids in Canalave. In Sandgem it was much easier to manipulate the more sheltered children into thinking he was a cool rich kid and they should like him because of that. He matured slightly as he grew older, but not by much. He at least learned to be kinder to his peers, to manipulate people less, and to appreciate what he had slightly more. No matter the change, however, he was still a spoiled rich brat at heart. So when the distribution of Pokemon was announced he had to be one of the first to sign up. With his spot securely taken, all he had to do was wait to be introduced to the partner that would be with him, so he hoped, for the rest of his life. The partner was not at all what he had accepted; when he went to Professor Birch's lab he was given a Caterpie. Angered by what he considered to be an unfair twist of fate, he got halfway between Sandgem and Jubilife when he tried to abandon the Caterpie. Despite his best efforts, however, guilt overcame him and he turned back before he got to Jubilife. Then he resolved never to be so callous again and to accept what was given to him. It was an important lesson that would stay with him.

    When he reached Jubilife Ethan traded a Rattata he'd captured for Flare, the Vulpix. On his way to the next city he captured Maverick, who happened to be a Magikarp at the time. After his evolution he, along with his two teammates, became Ethan's most highly used Pokemon. This rings true to this day.

    Ethan defeated the Sinnoh league and the Elite Four when he was seventeen, two years after he started. After that he returned home to his parents for a while to prove that he had brought glory to the family name. For the first time in his life his father told him he was proud of him, while his mother cooed over Verde, his old Caterpie evolved into Butterfree, and Flare. The next step, he decided, was to move to Hoenn and take that challenge as well. He would not rest until he had at least two Elite Four victories under his belt.

    In Hoenn he acquired Oliver the Persian - a Meowth at the time - and Calix the Espeon, in that order. Oliver, he caught. Calix, he he traded for a Noctowl he'd caught in Sinnoh. The Noctowl, named Yoruna, had never been one of his favorite Pokemon. He used her for her strength, but seeing as she'd tried and almost succeeded in eating Verde when he caught her, he'd always disliked her. Calix was a much better addition to his team, primarily because he didn't try to eat anyone.

    In the Hoenn league, Ethan was just as successful as he'd been in the Sinnoh league. He adored Hoenn, so when he was finished he settled down in Lavaridge. Training in this area helped his team to build a resistance to Fire and Rock types. Though life there was ideal, soon Ethan grew tired of staying in one place. He moved to Saffron and got a job as an attendant at the ever growing casino. At first all was well but his wages were cut, making it hard to pay his rent and feed both himself and his Pokemon. Stressed and frustrated, he grew more and more frustrated with his boss until he snapped. One morning he was set to close up, as casino hours were from 6PM to 6AM. He thought no one else was there, so he took a set of keys and opened one of the safes, taking thousands of dollars. His plan was to claim that someone else came in and robbed him, then skip town. But the boss came in to pick up his forgotten wallet and caught Ethan red handed. Instantly he was handed over to the authorities. Instead of a jail sentence he feared, he was given two hundred hours of community service. He commutes to Vermillion to do his community service, and openly despises it. He feels himself too good for it.

    Pokemon:
    -Verde
    -Butterfree
    -Female
    -Verde was Ethan's first Pokemon. Received from Birch as a Caterpie, he wasn't a big fan of her at first. In fact, he tried to abandon her. But he came back for her, and since then their bond has grown. Ethan usually lets her stay out of her ball and if she can't perch on his shoulder, she grasps his back and folds her wings, making it look almost as though he has wings. She's wildly territorial and doesn't like other females of any species around him, besides the Pokemon on her team. Other than that she's docile and will only attack when ordered to.
    -Verde looks exactly like any other female Butterfree, with dark spots on her lower wings, save for eight lighter purple markings on her right side. On closer inspection it is apparent that they are scars in the shape of talons. This is due to when Ethan's Noctowl from the Sinnoh league tried to carry her off and eat her.

    -Flare
    -Vulpix
    -Female
    -Ethan caught a Rattata between Sandgem and Jubilife when he was fifteen. He traded that Rattata in Jubilife for Flare and has never regretted it. She didn't like him much when he first got her, but over time she's grown affectionate toward him. Flare evolved during Ethan's gym battle with Flannery, surprising him. As it turns out there was a fire stone laying on the ground and she accidentally stepped on it. Neither of them regret it, since it has caused a huge boost in her power.
    -There is no real unique quality to Flare's appearance. If anything, her forelock is a bit longer. Around her neck she wears a brown leather collar with a little gold tag with her name on it.

    -Maverick
    -Gyarados
    -Male
    -Ethan caught Maverick as a Magikarp in a pond just outside Jubilife. He was a total accident; Ethan initially threw the ball at an Abra, that teleported out of the way just in time. When it evolved it became his powerhouse. For every tough battle he sends Maverick in first, because he knows that he is quite capable of winning through sheer strength. Maverick is like nitroglycerin. He is completely gentle, unless someone touches him. This is only unauthorized touching, mind. Ethan and his teammates are fine, but if other trainers touch him he will attack first and ask later.
    -Maverick is about the same as any other Gyarados as far as appearance goes, but his scales are a slightly lighter blue than those of other Gyarados.

    -Kodona
    -Lairon
    -Female
    -Kodona was Ethan's fourth Pokemon. Captured as an Aron, she has been an integral part of his battling team since. Often he will pair her with Maverick as a double battle team. Maverick will use Hydro Pump, Thrash, and other such vicious attacks, and Kodona will use Earthquake. Maverick is immune to it, so it is a devastating attack that doesn't affect her team mate. Due to all of their battles together Kodona and Maverick have developed a strong bond. It's difficult to have the two of them out at the same time, but whenever he can Ethan allows them to have time together.
    -Kodona is meticulous about the cleanliness of her armor. She keeps it clean and shining at all times and prides herself on how strong it is.

    -Oliver
    -Persian
    -Male
    -Oliver was digging out of the trash outside Ethan's house when he found him. On a whim he sent Verde to incapacitate him so that he could capture him. The attempt was successful. Seeing as Ethan has not challenged a league since he captured Oliver, he has not seen much action. He has, however, seen just enough to have evolved into a Persian. Oliver's evolution didn't change his inherently sweet and gentle nature, nor his adoration of Pecha berries.
    -Oliver's ears are floppy, almost like a dog or newborn kitten. One would think this would inhibit his hearing but it in fact does not. His tail is more curled than is normal as well, suggesting that he's very healthy and well cared for, but inexperienced.

    -Calix
    -Espeon
    -Male
    -A traveler passing through Lavaridge posted a sign at the Center advertising that he had an Espeon for trade. The traveler noted that he wanted a good strong Flying type. That meant Yoruna. Ethan went to the Center rooms and offered the Noctowl for trade. It was accepted immediately, which meant that Ethan had a new addition to his team. Calix turned out to be perfect. He and Verde worked well together, and are a perfect double battle team. Calix is quiet; in fact, Ethan had never heard him make a single sound, besides purrs. He is of the belief that he is mute. But Calix expresses everything he needs to with his large purple eyes.
    -Calix is slick, thin, and lithe. His size allows him to move quickly, and he's incredibly graceful. His mannerisms are remniscent of a dancer, even.

    RP Sample:
    While the crowd roared applause, Ethan Sarvais stepped out onto the field. He went as far as the white line showing where the trainer was meant to stand and waved his hand in acknowledgement of their praise. Despite the audience's voracity Ethan knew where his focus should be. That point was across the stadium from him, standing behind the opposite white line. She was pretty, there was no doubt about that. She looked as though she may have just turned eighteen, if that; a short, cute brunette with a nice figure. But that wasn't important right now. What was important was her Pokemon team, and how she directed them.

    "Alright folks, this is going to be a three on three battle, no switches. Both trainers currently have six Pokemon on their person, but they must choose only three. Let the battle commence! Trainers, release your first Pokemon."

    Ethan's heart thudded and adrenaline coursed through his veins as he threw a dark purple ball onto the field. It opened and released his key Pokemon, his Verde, onto the field before returning to his hand. His opponent threw her ball as well, releasing an Alakazam. Ethan laughed under his breath; this would be easy. He had an obvious type advantage here.

    The other trainer would be allowed to go first, since he released his Pokemon first.

    "Kazza, use Psych Up!" she instructed it. It obeyed, its whiskers and spoons glowing. That was fine; Ethan wouldn't give it time to buff too far.

    "We'll wrap this one up quickly, Verde," he called. "Silver Wind."

    Verde flapped her wings prettily, stirring up a dusting of sparkling silver particles that flew in a wind toward Alakazam. The gale struck it full on, knocking it back a few inches. Despite the attack's high effectiveness Alakazam was able to push on. This Pokemon was obviously a force to be reckoned with, especially since it could easily compete with Verde as far as speed went.

    "Good job, Kazza," its trainer praised. "Now, use Hypnosis."

    Alakazam focused its gaze intently on Verde, willing her to fall asleep. The power was so strong Ethan even began to feel his eyes droop shut. But Verde turned her back, facing her master with a questioning expression, as though asking what she ought to do next. Ethan couldn't help but smile; that had taken effort to avoid. "Let's pull out all the stops. Sunny Day, then follow up with a Giga Drain."

    Verde immediately flew into actions. She spread her wings wide, encouraging a sudden burst of sunlight - never mind the fact that they were indoors. The sudden heat was a shock to anyone who hadn't been expecting it, but Ethan's time in Lavaridge had him acclimated to such temperatures. Verde then divebombed Alakazam, grabbed its head, and sank her small fangs into its forehead. It shrieked and shook its head violently in an effort to get her off, but its efforts were not successful until she decided she'd drained enough energy from it. While the attack's effects had been good for the moment, they could ultimately prove dangerous, however; the trainer would be more adamant to finish, and use more powerful, if self destructive, moves.

    Ethan's fears were confirmed when the trainer gave her next order.

    "Let's finish this, Kazza! We can beat that bug! Psycho Cut!"

    Alakazam let out a roar and charged Verde, his spoon glowing a mind numbing purple color. Verde made an attempt to dodge, but wasn't successful; the Alakazam slashed her across the front with its spoon, leaving a shallow laceration. Ethan gritted his teeth angrily. He absolutely would not put up with physical harm being brought to his Verde.

    "Solar Beam!" he called, fuming. With the sunlight still strong, Verde was able to pull it in and let out a beam of brilliant green energy within a matter of seconds. The beam hit Alakazam square in the chest and knocked it onto its back. Ethan and Verde waited to see if it would get back up while its trainer called encouragement. After several moments, it let go of its spoon, letting them know that it was done. Ethan smirked triumphantly, but he couldn't let himself get too cocky. It wasn't over yet.

    "An impressive match!" the announcer gushed. "Ethan Sarvais won that one. But never fear, Alyssa Nolan, it's not over yet!"

    'No, it's not. We'd better keep up the good show,' Ethan thought.

    "Return, Verde," he called out. He wanted to begin the next match with a fresh, and not bleeding, Pokemon. In order to be able to tend to her wound later he recalled her. This time he let the other trainer send her Pokemon out first, so that he could have his choice on what to use. She called a Kangaskhan out to battle, which left Ethan with a number of options. He could always just use Kodona, who would have a type advantage... unless Kangaskhan knew Dizzy Punch, Earthquake, Surf, or any other move of those types. No, he thought he would play this one safe.

    "Don't let me down, Oliver," he called as he threw a creamy white ball with a single pinkish gem out onto the field. His Persian formed and took a battle stance, his tail swishing irritatedly. He didn't look all that scary, with his floppy ears and obvious inexperience, but Ethan was hoping this could be a chance to increase his confidence. In the same fashion as before, since the other trainer chose first Ethan was allowed to make the first move.

    "Screech," he ordered. Oliver opened his mouth and gave a blood curdling screech, which made the Kangaskhan hold her ears flat against her head in discomfort. Obviously it had worked. The trainer grimaced, knowing that a lowered Defense wouldn't be good against a Persian. They had notoriously high attack, and knew notoriously good moves. "Mega Punch!" she directed, her fingers crossed. Her Kangaskhan ran at Oliver and cocked her arm back, obviously packing a lot of power. But Oliver was ready. At the last second he slipped between her legs, just pausing long enough to bite her tail gently, a taunting gesture.

    "Don't be cocky," Ethan scolded. "While you're close, hit her with a Slash."

    Oliver swatted at her with both of his front paws and caught her soft underbelly, leaving several deep rakes in her scales. Kangaskhan squealed and stampeded away, limping slightly to avoid irritating the scratches.

    "Don't give up, Kanga," her trainer urged. "Focus Punch!"

    Neither Ethan nor Oliver were ready for the sudden burst of physical strength that slammed into Oliver's side. All the air was knocked out of his lungs and he flew a foot in the air before coming to rest on the ground, panting slightly. Ethan knew when to call it over; even if Oliver could get up again that hit had been enough for the day.

    "Good job, Oliver," he said soothingly. "Come on back."

    He called Oliver back into his ball, signalling his defeat.

    "That one didn't last long," the announcer commented. "Now we've seen an impressive victory on both sides. This last match determines the whole thing."

    There was a mutual understanding between Ethan and his opponent that all bets were off on the last match, and they should release their Pokemon at the same time so as to avoid any assured type advantages. Ethan already knew who he would use; he'd known without a doubt that she would come into this battle. He withdrew the creamy white ball with red flame markings from his vest pocket and threw it, releasing his Ninetales onto the field. At the same time as Ethan called Flare out his opponent let a Grovyle onto the field. Ethan smirked. This would be easy. Grovyle didn't have anything that could best his fiery little fox.

    His opponent blanched, knowing what was coming. She might as well surrender now, for all the good her efforts would do. But that would be bad form.

    "Slam," the trainer called desperately. Her Grovyle slammed its body into Flare, but the effect was minimal; obviously, it was as unexperienced as Oliver. This would be infinitely simple, then. Flare was almost as seasoned as Verde, and had been there throughout his wins in both leagues. She was ready for this.

    "Confuse Ray."

    Flare's eyes glowed as she stared at Grovyle. Slowly its expression became one of puzzlement. Its trainer chewed her lip nervously, and Ethan could practically see the wheels working behind her eyes. "Leaf Storm," she finally said helplessly. Grovyle lunged at Flare then halted and punched itself in the nose. That was Ethan's cue.

    "Fire Blast," he ordered. Flare braced herself, then spat a jet of white hot flame at Grovyle. The attack was a perfect hit and by the time the smoke cleared Grovyle was lying on its back, its leaves smouldering.

    "Explosive!" the announcer exclaimed. "That's the game. Ethan Sarvais is the victor, two out of three. Let's get some applause for this heated match!"

    The crowd obliged gladly and Ethan nodded as he returned Flare. With a wave he walked back out of the stadium, glowing with pride. This wasn't the end of the tournament, but this certainly wasn't a bad start, either.
     

    Chadlington

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  • Better?

    Ok I have made some changes. Is this ok? This is actually my first ever role play...so please, tell me if i really suck.
     

    SkyisUmbreon

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  • Name: Seto Kimishina
    Gender:Male
    Age:19
    Appearance: Seto's hair is a light brownish color, messy enough that it covers his left eye. His eye's are colored a shining silver, people often comment that he looks like he has two mini moons for his eyes. He is slightly tanned, no scars or tatoos. When not in community service attire, he would wear a white trimmed black jacket, with a black shirt and black jeans. His shoes, or rather boots are colored gray trimed black. He wears one red glove on his right hand.

    Personality: Seto can come across as a shady person, and is often called "cold as ice." This attutude however does not interfere with his pokemon. He shares a strong bond with each of them, and feels as though they are the only ones that truly understand him. Because of this personality, he has no friends, and does not open up to people easily, as it is hard just to get past his "Go away" appearance. He tends to anger easily, and is not quick to forgive. He will come across as a "loner" and hard hearted.

    History: Seto grew up in Vermilion City, having a pretty miserable childhood. He had a very bad relationship with his parents, often leading him to get into fights with both of them. Throughout his childhood, he resented others, and stayed away from them, scaring off those who tried to come close. At the age of 12 he had grown indepent, rebelling against his parents, and doing whatever he wanted. One day while he was walking through the streets of Vermillion, he spotted a Lucario, stealing food from one of the shops.
    As it ran past him, the store clerk yelled at him to stop him. Instead of stopping it however, Seto followed it into one of the surrounding forests, where he befrended it, finding a new level of respect for pokemon, and finding out that it was a girl. He named it Shilshadu. She however, did not want to join is pokemon team, and even though this confused him, he ignored it for some time. They began to spend a lot of time together, stealing and whatnot, this lead to Seto leaving his parents and house(not without stealing food for himself first mind you) and going to live with Shadu(nickname) in the forest.
    While in the forest, she trained him for a change. Shadu teaching Seto to be faster, unseen,and even some fighting techniques, while Seto taught her moves and such. One night, at the age of 15, while coming back from another one of their "raids" they were ambushed by a Haunter trying to steal what they had stolen. Seto and Shadu were able to protect their stash and the Haunter, seeing he was beaten, decided he might as well join them, and he became Seto's first pokemon to join his team. One year later, while unable to sleep, Seto lay awake on his sleepingbag outside.
    He saw Shadu leaving, and she seemed to be taking some of the food with her. Seto followed her, making sure to be unseen, as this could be the reason he had been noticing missing food ever since he had joined her. In the end, he found his suspicions were correct. As he guessed, she was feeding her son, Riolu. When she found out that he had followed her, she admitted to stealing the food for it, seeing no point in denying it, for he had already seen it. Seto now had another purpose for doing what he did.
    Two years later, Seto was alone, the hideout empty except for himself the Haunter had had captured and named Kain, and the Riolu. He had screwed up majorly, as it was his own fault Shadu got caught by the police. She had sacrificed herself to let him get away, but he had never seen her again. This happened a year ago, and ever since then he has been training both Riolu(who evolved to Lucario and was named Soren) and Kain so that they would be strong enough to help Seto rescue Shadu, or in other terms, break her out. This is when he himself got caught, and even though he tried to let Soren and Kain go, they stuck with him, also getting caught.
    The police were able to link this attempt, with the break in attempt on the bank one year ago, unfortunately for him. He was then sentenced to community service, almost torture for him seeing as he hated the community.

    Pokemon

    Species: Haunter
    Name: Kain
    Gender:Male
    History: Kain, was himself a theif, stealing from both stores and other thiefs. He was caught in the act by Seto and Shadu, and was captured by Seto, becoming his first official pokemon. Originally he only joined Seto and Shadu just to steal, but he eventually grew closer to Seto. His ability to phase through walls was a great addition to the group of theives, he is also an adept fighter.

    Species: Lucario
    Name: Soren
    Gender: Male
    History: Even if Soren was Seto's third pokemon by count, he was his second in terms of how close they were. He is the son of Shadu the Lucario, and was raised mostly by Seto. He was discovered by him when he followed Shadu to Soren's hiding place, where she had been feeding him and hiding him. When Shadu was captured, he gave his all in helping Seto break into the prison to try and free her. Unfortunately the group was caught, but Soren stayed by Seto's side, even when he tried to make him leave. Soren was born with longer spikes in the back of his hands.
     
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    Wow, jesus, you guys sure are efficient. Give me a minute, I'll read them all and write some feedback.

    Name: French "Frank" Landis
    It's a little fuzzy, probably since I just read through A BAZILLION SUs. Anyways, I'm confused why he had a need to steal a TV? Why he had a need to steal at all? He had money and an apartment. Maybe you could clear that up?
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    Name: Alberto "Grims" Grimsley
    I like this! Only issue I have is the talking Zoroark. But other than that, good.
    ACCEPTED

    Name: Kellyn Wayland
    Okay, I like this except I find it confusing why he had to steal if he battled and won money? Maybe try something a little different. d:
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    Name: Kyle Rays
    Okay, two things I have an issue with. He killed the passenger, therefore charged with murder/manslaughter, which I'm sure is a jailable offence. And two, your RP sample, you have problems with past and present tense and it's kind of hard to read.
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    Name: Ethan Sarvais
    WOW. This is quite amazing haha!
    ACCEPTED

    Ok I have made some changes. Is this ok? This is actually my first ever role play...so please, tell me if i really suck.
    Yep, yep, that's better. Make sure you keep an eye on your stuff when posting, okay?
    ACCEPTED

    OH and Feign? GOOD!
    ACCEPTED
     
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    ShaQuL

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    Name: Luk, Nickname: ShaQuL
    Gender: Male
    Age: 18
    Appearance:
    Wears dark blue jeans and Blue hoodie. Also has blue eyes and blonde hair. Has an earing in his left ear. Also has white trainers and white headphones.

    Personality:
    Gets angry easily and is VERY lazy. Likes to play with his pokemon and listen to Rap music. He doesnt like to be called names either. In his spare time he likes to collect rare stones.

    History:
    He was arrested for stealing pokemon and selling them. He did that for a few years without getting caught. He started stealing them because he didnt have any money. And his mum and his dad hated him and they kicked him outta their house. His brother helped him in the beginning but then he disappeared.


    Pokemon:
    Mudkip, Lotad, Cacnea and Gible

    Name: Muddy
    Species:
    Mudkip
    History: He's the first pokemon Luk ever had. They know each other for 10 years now but Muddy just won't evolve. Muddy likes to play with Luk
    and others. This Mudkip isnt blue. It is black and his cheeks are white.

    Name: Leaf
    Species:
    Lotad
    History:Leaf is a pokemon that came to Luk by itself. He just likes him
    . Also Leaf likes Pumpkin a lot.

    Name: Pumpkin
    Species:
    Cacnea
    History:Pumpkin is the only female pokemon that Luk has. She likes to hug everyone. She sleeps almost 12 hours a day. She is also orange instead of green.

    Name: Drake
    Species:
    Gabite
    History:Luk found Gible in a dark cave. He was then hurt very badly. Luk tried to sell him but Drake always came back. So Luk kept him.
    And after a few days he evolved into Gabite!

    RP Sample:
    Someone told the police of Luk selling Pokemon illrgally. When they arrived Luk noticed them. He knew they came to get him. So he told Leaf to use Watergun, Drake to use Flamethrower, Cacnea to use Razor leaf and Muddy to use dig. They all attacked at the same time. But most of them missed. Only Muddy's dig got one Police car.

    When Luk noticed that he had no chances he returned all his pokemon to their pokeballs and ran for it. But the police Mighteyena got his legs. He struggled for a while but then stopped. He knew he got caught for good this time. No more lucky escapes.
     

    NatureKeeper

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    Things fixed. Sorry for the incovenience. If it is still not okay, I'd be satisfied if you reject the SU.
     

    Quest

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    Okay, I like this except I find it confusing why he had to steal if he battled and won money? Maybe try something a little different. d:
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    :P I'll edit in a bit.
     

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  • Charles "Lucky Chuck" Sterling

    Name: Charles "Lucky Chuck" Sterling, or just Chuck
    Name Used For Fraud: Keith Smilfield
    Gender: Male
    Age:20
    Appearance: Donning a very trusting and trustworthy face, Chuck seems to fit into every crowd. Although usually seen in a nice fitting graphic tee with some pop culture reference or band logo, his fitted polos and suits also went well with his mocha skin. Semi-baggy jeans and silver buckled belt would usually accompany his casual attire, but no matter what he was wearing Chuck always had on his G-Shock watch, and probably his Oakley shades so there always seemed to be an air around him saying "I'm hip and important". Usually wearing a mysterious grin as if he knows something you don't, Chuck's general build and facial expressions are enough for the ladies to swarm over him. Long legs, milk chocolate skin, clear face, and muscular arms, Chuck is the epitome of tall, dark, and handsome.

    Personality: Chuck was always extremely open when it came to the people he hung out with. He doesn't care if they are smart or stupid, ugly or beautiful, sporty or lazy, all that matters is that they are interesting, just like him. He's the life of the party, and the go to guy if you're feeling down. He has a great sense of humor, and he can read people like a book. Unfortunately, he is a manipulative genius and will most likely feed off of your weaknesses if he doesn't like you. Instantly he can blend into any situation, and feeding off of this is how he went so long without being caught.

    History: Born and raised in Veilstone City, Chuck got his first pokémon, Drake, at the early age of ten. Realizing that his father was the head of the Sinnoh mafia, Chuck wanted to stay as far away from the family business as possible and hauled himself off to college in the Hoenn region at the early age of 16 because of his advanced testing scores in high school. It wasn't until his 18th birthday that Chuck realized just how deep his family's career was in his blood line. Bank account empty, and eviction notices posted on his door, Chuck finally realized deception was needed to survive. Entering a fake application into the regions largest bank and detailing himself as a 30 year old man with lots of banking experience, Keith Smilfield was hired by Hoenn Regional. Waiting only a few weeks before he struck, Chuck kept small amounts of money that people tried to deposit, and left it in a hole in his mattress. Chuck continued to do this in region after region pairing that with other crimes from petty theft to various forms of cyber crime, and occasionally helping poor people he saw on his adventures, until only Sinnoh and Unova were left. Finally getting caught in Cerulean when one of his partners in a case of bank fraud was bought out by the cops. Chuck had to much pride to call his dad and ask for help.

    Pokemon:

    Name: Drake
    Species: Dragonite
    History: Given to Chuck when he was ten, sort of as compensation from his father for not being there, Drake has served as his best friend, and get away, for the past 10 years. During Chuck's time in prison, Drake stayed low and stole enough food to survive while living in the abandoned condo that they had hauled up in. Drake seems to be a shade darker then most Dragonite, and has black underwings as opposed to the light blue ones most have.

    Name: Gepedo
    Species: Ditto
    History: Likes to imitate humans when possible. Gepedo was stollen by Chuck from a safety deposit box after he realized a distraction was needed. Gepedo usually knocked out the guards and assumed their position while the heists took place. Usually acts as the human who owns the condo when anyone gets suspicious, after Chuck was put in jail.

    Miscellanious: Chuck's father could have easily paid off the guards to let him go, but Chuck's pride kept him from asking. His father found out about a week after his arrest but decided that instead of intervening hugely, he would just pay off the judge enough to get his sentence reduced to community service.

    RP Sample: As all the adrenaline that had been pumping in Art's body seconds before stopped flowing, Art almost collapsed. Whistling Moose over, Art jumped on the back of his beloved Jagion and rode off in the same direction as Avery was walking, passing the stranger on his way to her. Grabbing a blanket out of his bag and lying down on his back, looking up at the sky, Art tried to be the catalyst of the conversation to kill the deafening silence surrounding the two, "So... you did good back there. Also, thanks for not killing me for letting him escape, I appreciate it". Slowly his eyes started to droop and he called out thank you to the man before he could drift off. "Oh yeah!" he called out suddenly after the "conversation" had stopped between him and the distant drifter, "What's your name?", it seemed like a reasonable request if the guy would be following them around. Directing his words towards Avery, he spoke quietly fighting to keep his eyes open, and in a tone mocking the stranger Art spoke two words, "G'night Cupcake".

    While the caravan was walking Art had his first dream that he had in a while. In his head, Art was walking through a field, searching for the entrance to some hidden vault, coming just to teach about animals. Finding the entrance, he walked in, showing all the papers he needed to get clearance. It was clear immediately after getting through the security check points that this vault was the richest he'd ever been to. Suddenly his clothes were replaced by a tuxedo and Moose had on elegant robes fit for a king. A woman appeared in front of him on a stool, the most beautiful he had ever seen, and suddenly the only thing he could think about was being with her. As he walked over he could feel the courage rising in his chest, but right as he opened his mouth to speak, he woke up. Rubbing his face, Art realized he had been crying in his sleep. Muttering one word to himself as he sat up and rubbed his hair, "Demi...".
     
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    Quest

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    Okay i Edited it to better fit the story for ya.
     
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    you guys don't even give me a MINUTE to THINK!! D8

    Name: Seto Kimishina
    good, good. everyone seems to be going with the TORTURED BACKGROUND. i guess thats normal, i suppose. XD
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    Name: Luk, Nickname: ShaQuL
    this is far lacking in information. FAR. it doesn't even touch up on anything in his early life! plus, stealing and selling pokemon is probably a jailable offence. what kind of 18 year old can do that without getting caught? and HOW? sorry.
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    :P I'll edit in a bit.
    When i said try something different, i meant other than stealing! i listed a bunch of examples on the front page. I'll give you one more chance. D:
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    Name: Charles "Lucky Chuck" Sterling, or just Chuck
    This is good, but you will most likely have to change your crime. Stealing hundreds of thousands of dollars is a jailable offense. XD
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