GoldfishHorde
Whoa! A horde of Goldfish appeared!
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- Seen Aug 27, 2014
@GoldFish: I'll let you know if the person decided not to sign up, but since I am here, I may as give even more advice lol. Your SU is still a bit too short :p Expand more on personality and history, as those are the two most important things.
Sorry Bastian, Caitlynn is all alone :( I should have made another NPC to interact with her. Unless you want Billy to just happen to 'run' into Caitlynn lol :/
On that note, if Chester wants to accompany Alex back to the store, his sister will have a surprise for him 0.0 Either way, he's not gonna be too happy.
I can expand more on history just fine, as I thought it was a bit lackluster, but what more are you looking for in Personality? I'm curious, and want to flesh out this character as much as I can.