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Smarties-chan

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    Interesting sprite, interesting sprite indeed... the anatomy is good and the shading seems okay... However, the outlining could use a little work (by that I mean, you should use other colours than just black) 8/10 looks good otherwise, but the outlines bug me...
     
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    [_DarkDragon_]

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    Anyone wanna rate this (I made it from scratch)?
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    Smarties-chan

    Should've had that name change
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    The anatomy and shading seem flawless, and the outlines look good too (it could use some black outline though, but it's just fine that way too ^_^) but the shiny one's colours are horribble, I think. The normal one 10/10 and the shiny one 7/!0 (as stated, before, the colours are horrible)
     

    jc_rcw

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    Crystal_Lily_Breeze said:
    You're the second person who said that they couldn't see it (Which is wierd, since I can.). Oh well, I have the one with a color background right here: Pixel Art Lounge
    Thats better, it looks great 10/10
     

    jc_rcw

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    Crystal_Lily_Breeze said:
    You're the second person who said that they couldn't see it (Which is wierd, since I can.). Oh well, I have the one with a color background right here: Pixel Art Lounge
    Thats better, it looks great 10/10
     
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    Crystal_Lily_Breeze said:
    You're the second person who said that they couldn't see it (Which is wierd, since I can.). Oh well, I have the one with a color background right here: Pixel Art Lounge
    Awesome, nothing wrong with shading or anything. 10/10
     
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    Here's a fire starter I made, I call it Flarical. It's a flare caracal. o.O I think it came out good, but the back legs and tail bug me.
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    Smarties-chan

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    The shading seems okay, but the head is rather big and the pose looks a little stiff... 7.6/!0 it's really a great sprite, but I know you can do better =)
     
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    PuppyGirl said:
    This is one of my newest creations, the Pyrix. Any comments/criticism? (I made it using Pidgey, and Articuno, plus a few of some added things I made)
    The wing on the left looks like it's slightly bigger than the one on the right...

    Anyways, my main suggestion for that is to change the color of the feet and beak...and maybe the eye. Especially the feet, though - they blend in with the main body color way too much, and it's hard to make them out at first glance.

    Shadow Scizor said:
    Here's a fire starter I made, I call it Flarical. It's a flare caracal. o.O I think it came out good, but the back legs and tail bug me.
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    The problem with the tail seems to be that it gets wider near the end instead of thinner...the right side of the tail's outline could follow the left side a bit more. I do like how the flame looks, though.

    The back legs...for one, take away that tan area right underneath the tail and make that gray like the rest of the leg (and make the outline on the left side of that same tan area gray as well). That won't totally fix it, but it should help to make it look a bit better.

    Also: for shading, try using a different color. The one you've picked isn't dark enough to be a decent color of shading. ^_^;;
     

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    [_DarkDragon_] said:
    Anyone wanna rate this (I made it from scratch)?
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    Absolutely cool! so you made this one from scratch and this means you drew this one istead of doing ...edits right? COOL I SIMPLY ADMIRE SPRITES DRAWN , THEY ARE GOOD THINGS TO HAvE A LOOK AT.

    10/10 for you *Amazed by sprites that are DRAWN FROM SCRATCH)
     
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    [_DarkDragon_] said:
    yes, scratch means I made them out of nothing (all I had was a picture of Rukario), I made the following today:
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    tell me what you think :P
    That's awesome, no problems with shading or anything. 10/10
     
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