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Poem Of The Week 3

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Ayselipera

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    Poem Of The Week 3​
    Competition​
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    Introduction

    Welcome to the Poem Of The Week 3 contest. Hosted by Astinus and myself. The original contest was hosted by Abnegation and the second by Sweet Jasmine. Now let me explain what this competition is all about. This competition is for those who wish to enter their poems which comply with the corresponding theme, so that they can have some recognition for their amazing talent! Remember that the Moderator of this section will be supervising. If you win Poem Of The Week, you will win an emblem along with the choice of the next week's theme and the option to co-host.

    Poem of the Week is a great way to test your skills in the poetry world. You'll also get to see what other people think of how you express your emotions using words.

    Please make sure to read and follow all Other Writing and PokeCommunity rules as posted below before participating.

    Rules and Guidelines

    • Remember to keep within the Writing rules, the Poem of the Week rules and of course the PC forum wide rules. Also make sure that you post your poem within the timeline which is posted within "The Theme of the Week" section below.
    • First and foremost, NEVER plagiarize work. I will know; I check all poems, even for lyrics. I understand there may be coincidences where your poetry looks like someone else's and that's fine, but make sure it's all your own work.
    • You may only post 1 poem relevant to the given theme of the week. If the theme is "anything" just feel free to post any type of poem, with any theme.
    • Please only post good feedback on other entries within this thread. By feedback I mean good comments on why you like them rather than full criticism. Although it's always nice to post in the thread of the original poem too (if there is one).
    • When submitting a poem either post a link to the thread that hosts the poem (must be on PC) or post the poem within the thread, and I will put it up on the first post with the others.
    • This is a judging contest, there will be no votes. HOWEVER you may Pm me if you would like to express your love for a particular poem and I will take it into consideration.
    • You may post to state that you will be posting a poem and entering. Asking questions and the likes is also fine, all discussion may go within the thread.
    • If you are posting a poem please keep it nicely layed out with as little formatting as possible. It's better we don't have big bright text and numerous BB codes. It just makes it a little easier on the eyes. Thank you.
    So please participate, have fun, don't be shy, and always remember your poetry is a expression of emotions and experiences, and of course a good effort as well as talent so no matter what you write it will have a chance! Please don't feel intimidated, even if this is your first poem it still stands a fighting chance! Remember that if you want to participate, but you're not sure how to write a good poem there are stickied threads right in the poetry section for you to review.

    Credits to Abnegation for the original introduction and rules. Also credits to Sweet Jasmine for her edits.

    Hall Of Poetry Winners

    List of the winners and their winning entry.
    1. Scarf - Motion
    2. Reminiscing - Memories
    3. Spearow - Omega
    4. Bay Alexison - You Remember?
    5. Dr. Gregory House - Winter Whispers
    6. Ineffable - Jealousy
    7. Abnegation - Broken
    8. txteclipse - Life's Litmus
    9. Manipulation - I Had Nothing Else To Do
    10. Klippy - Un-named
    11. Scarf - The Theatre of Forgotten People
    12. Cheesymitten - Isolation
    13. Missingno. 7-4468 - Graciousness of Heart
    14. tjgamer - Lanturn's Pond
    15. Scarf - The Joy Particle
    16. *hylian*sakura* - Quintessence
    17. Zirkle38 - Goodbye
    18. IceKnight212 - Night Marries Day
    19. Richard Lynch - In the Cold
    20. Missingno.7-4468 - Untitled
    21. IceKnight212 - The Wayward Soul

    Theme of the Week

    This week's theme is all about - TBA

    Entry Period: TBA
    Start: TBA
    End: TBA

    Judges: TBA

    Winners will be announced on TBA as soon as possible.

    Submissions

    Week one entries.
    Theme: Anything
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    Week two entries.
    Theme: Time
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    Week three entries.
    Theme: Light and Darkness
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    Week four entries.
    Theme: Passion
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    Week five entries.
    Theme: Nonsense Poems
    Spoiler:


    Week six entries.
    Theme: Home
    Spoiler:


    Week seven entries.
    Theme: The Paranormal
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    Anything?
    I sat and pondered as I stared at the monotonous screen, how could I describe anything?
    The opposite of Void? Anything that is there, anything of matter.
    Or is anything different to that?
    Emotions and Feelings and Oppinions
    And Love.
    They're all anything, but not visible to the eye.
    Not the naked eye.

    But could it really be anything?
    Like a lucious green field, lying under the caressing Sun?
    Or the melodic pulse of Music gliding into my Ear and stimulating my Brain?

    And then, i eventually came to a sudden halt.
    A conclusion.
    Anything is too broad a topic.
    Too big.
    Too expansive.
    Anything can take you
    Anywhere.


    (Off the top of my head, i suppose :D I had nothing to do... Anything could have made me happy.)
     
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    Ayselipera

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    That's a really interesting and creative way to apply the theme into your poem! Even if it the theme really didn't mean the word anything.

    Anyways I put the title to your poem as Anything? because I wasn't sure if you were asking a question or if that was your title. If I made a mistake though just tell me and I'll fix it. Thanks for participating and good luck!
     

    Missingno.7-4468

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    I'll participate too.

    Boiling Blood
    Spoiler:


    Just a poem I wrote a few days ago. Kinda personal too.
     

    Ayselipera

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    Question:
    Is there a limit or restriction on how long it is?

    Yes the length of time each entry period lasts is listed under the title that says "Theme of the Week". This weeks contest ends on April 14 or you could think of it as Wednesday to Wednesday. :)

    @Missingno.7-4468 - Thank you for participating and good luck!
     
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    TJgamer

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    Here's one of my older poems that I have posted months ago.
    Since it was one of my earliest works here in PokéCommunity, it may be somewhat amateurish.
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    Just in case you're interested, here is the original thread in which I posted this poem.
    https://www.pokecommunity.com/showthread.php?t=191241
     

    Ayselipera

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    Here's one of my older poems that I have posted months ago.
    Since it was one of my earliest works here in PokéCommunity, it may be somewhat amateurish.
    Spoiler:


    Just in case you're interested, here is the original thread in which I posted this poem.
    https://www.pokecommunity.com/showthread.php?t=191241

    Don't worry about it being one of your firsts. Every poem counts and everyone has an equal chance. I'm sure I'll enjoy it.

    Best of luck to you and thanks for trying out!
     

    Yusshin

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    Imprisonment

    Eternal slumber.
    The solemn cry for freedom.
    Our earthly bodies
    Trap a spirit who waits for
    Its very first flight.

    Just a simple haiku about the human soul.

    Are we allowed multiple entries?
     
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    farage5

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    Alright. Here's one of my poems I've written for school.

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    Are we allowed multiple entries?

    Nope. One and one only.

    Something I wrote a few months ago, I wish to see how it will fair.

    Sestina


    I sing for absolution, We want change
    They cast distractions to avert our eyes
    This world's pollution will begin to rise
    Derailed by passion, strung by lunacy
    This sphere has been a home to all we love
    We have a purpose which cant fall again

    Just one more sunset and the moon will rise
    War stricken land will feel pain once again
    New lust, gunshot cancer kills all love
    This war cannot be justified by change
    The scars will heal but not our tainted eyes
    To fight for peace is just lunacy

    The answer is there to take but again
    People strive for sucess and rarely change
    Thier ways are lost with lunacy
    Abnegation is but dirt in our eyes
    We work together when it's love
    We search for wealth so our noses may rise

    This pain can only lead to lunacy
    The clock of despair strikes twelve, peace must rise
    It's too late, they have starved to their eyes
    A four foot coffin meets the ground again
    They don't need your coins, what they need is change
    Has humainty lost it's will to love?

    You lost your trust in them, you lost your love
    But hate, in your heart, brought lunacy
    To kill an innocent, does it bring change?
    As you come to terms, guilt begins to rise
    You cant shake the fear, so you kill again
    You took a life, there's nothing in your eyes

    It's hard to know the joy before our eyes
    But life is twisted with more than just love
    We accept that life is tough so again
    We just let our minds drive to lunacy
    It's nice to know love when turmoil rises
    Absolution will come, so accept change.

    We all change, before our misguided eyes
    Hate will rise, but we will make room for love
    When the world falls to lunacy, live, laugh, again.
     

    Ayselipera

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    Just a simple haiku about the human soul.

    Are we allowed multiple entries?

    I'm pretty sure that's more of a free verse then a haiku since yours consist of more then 3 lines and does not follow the 5 - 7 - 5 syllable pattern that traditional haiku's consist of. Nevertheless it will still be counted and feel free to correct me if I'm wrong or if you have any further questions.

    Also you can only enter one entry per contest. So the answer to your question is no.

    Anyways, good luck! :)

    Alright. Here's one of my poems I've written for school.

    Okay, its been entered. Thanks for joining and good luck!

    Nope. One and one only.

    Something I wrote a few months ago, I wish to see how it will fair.

    Oh a sestina very nice. I know I sound like a broken record but, thanks for answering the question and thank you for participating. Good luck!
     

    Yusshin

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    There are two kinds of haikus. The 5-7-5, and the 5-5-5-7-5.

    I followed the second type :]

    And okay xD well, I like my poem, so I'll keep it in the contest :P
     

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    There are two kinds of haikus. The 5-7-5, and the 5-5-5-7-5.

    I followed the second type :]

    And okay xD well, I like my poem, so I'll keep it in the contest :P

    That's fine then. As long as it's four lines or more it will be counted. I just wanted to clear up any confusion as to whether it was a haiku or not. Thanks for the information!
     

    farage5

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    So you're saying we can't follow the rules for the first haiku Yusshin posted? It's only supposed to have 3 lines.
     

    Yusshin

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    So you're saying we can't follow the rules for the first haiku Yusshin posted? It's only supposed to have 3 lines.

    You can make a haiku like mine :s I don't see why not. Mine was entered after all.

    Or make one that's 5-7-5-7-5?

    I might edit mine to be like that :s I don't like my second line rofl

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    I fixed it up to be more traditional, since 5-5-5-7-5 might have been a disinformation on my ninth grade secondary school teacher's part :s

    Here's the editted version, as to not port confusion.

    Eternal slumber.
    The solemn cry for freedom.
    Our earthly bodies
    Trap a spirit who waits for
    Its very first flight.
     
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    So you're saying we can't follow the rules for the first haiku Yusshin posted? It's only supposed to have 3 lines.

    What I mean is a regular Haiku that consists of three lines is too short to be entered in the contest. Unless of course you made a variation of a Haiku like Yusshin did that was five lines. If you insist on writing a standard Haiku then please at least have two Haiku's together. By this I mean if the topic was "dogs" then write two Haiku's about dogs, but they can not be two different poems entirely. The second must be a continuation of the first.

    Here is an example.

    Dogs are really cute
    They are much cuter then cats
    Walking dogs is fun

    I walk them all day
    I like to play fetch with them
    In the city park.


    I just made that off the top of my head so sorry for the quality. xD

    The only time this rule wouldn't count would be if the winner of the poetry contest picked a "Haiku only" theme. Which would be very interesting to see might I add.



    You can make a haiku like mine :s I don't see why not. Mine was entered after all.

    Or make one that's 5-7-5-7-5?

    I might edit mine to be like that :s I don't like my second line rofl

    [Edit]

    I fixed it up to be more traditional, since 5-5-5-7-5 might have been a disinformation on my ninth grade secondary school teacher's part :s

    Here's the editted version, as to not port confusion.

    Eternal slumber.
    The solemn cry for freedom.
    Our earthly bodies
    Trap a spirit who waits for
    Its very first flight.

    Edits are not usually allowed, but since this is the first week and there is some confusion I'll replace this one with the old one. For future reference though the poem you originally post is the one that will be in the contest unless you choose to drop out.
     
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    Yusshin

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    Thanks a lot; I'll be sure to verify that everything's correct in the next competition :]

    Good luck everyone!
     

    farage5

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    What I mean is a regular Haiku that consists of three lines is too short to be entered in the contest. Unless of course you made a variation of a Haiku like Yusshin did that was five lines. If you insist on writing a standard Haiku then please at least have two Haiku's together. By this I mean if the topic was "dogs" then write two Haiku's about dogs, but they can not be two different poems entirely. The second must be a continuation of the first.

    Here is an example.

    Dogs are really cute
    They are much cuter then cats
    Walking dogs is fun

    I walk them all day
    I like to play fetch with them
    In the city park.

    Oh, I get it. It's let what my teacher gives us for homework, except we have to do 5 haikus of the same subject.
     

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    I would love to participate. ^.^ And the open topic gives me a perfect opportunity to air out my musty poetry skills. :/


    Quintessence

    Alone in the corners of her mind
    Where dusty thoughts stay covered by
    Veils of lies and shrouds of her pride
    She keeps me tucked away

    Here in the forgotten attic room
    I rattle hoping to escape soon
    From chains of the past rusting at last
    Maybe I can break loose

    Heart of hearts, what lies within
    I am everything that she can be
    I've been buried, I'm hidden
    I am called "personality"
    If she finds herself, I'll be set free
    If she embraces individuality
     
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