Pok?mon Dawn/Dusk

[rubyrulez]

The edges look rough and there's no shadowing on the last 2 pokemon. For the first one, the shadowing is okay but the edge is rough.

~Jeff

I'm sorry, I did say I wasn't the best artist around, so this comment was unnecessary! :\

 

[Dawson]

It's just constructive criticism rubyrulez, there's no need to take it personally.

 

[Matt]

I agree with phoenix :)
Maybe you are not champion and master of sprite...
but this is your sprite!
And this is better than the best pokemon ripped and take you...

Thanks Matt ;)

 

[Peekimon]

I kinda like Seedy. But, Burnbal needs more work. Maybe adding some flames around it?
And Eilen is Ok. Just a bit more tweaking.

 

[Dawson]

Yeah, and credit where it's due, they are made from scratch. And that is difficult to do if you aren't a great spriter.

 

[PKMN_Sage]

With practice, you can get better. I also think being creative will also help with spriting. Look at the two sprites in my sig, those are the first ones I EVER made and they turned out okay. Although, it did take awhile before I thought they looked fine. Even now, I think they aren't all that great.

 

[rubyrulez]

Well, I will probably ask somebody who is good at spriting to help me out. Art has never been my best ability, and those weren't hand drawn, either. If anybody can help me out, please let me know... :)

 

[PKMN_Sage]

Mine aren't hand drawn either, I just made it from scratch. I didn't even know you could create hand drawn sprites on a computer, how does one do that?

 

[Dawson]

Hand drawn, i assume, means from scratch with the use of the mouse. I could be wrong though.

 

[rubyrulez]

Hand drawn, i assume, means from scratch with the use of the mouse. I could be wrong though.

That's actually correct, I did them on the computer with a mouse. Hopefully, I can get better at it. Anyways, I have two more names of Pokemon that were mentioned in my fanfic.

:pokeball: Burnsphere
:pokeball: Bubbler

Hopefully, more soon!

 

[Peekimon]

I know it's VERY hard to draw from scratch with a mouse. It would be MUCH easier if done with a pen mouse though. It's like a pencil. Anyways, would you like some names? Here are some:
Fire type:
Burnbird
Figon (Fire + Dragon)
Grass Type:
Grasleef
Foreflower

That's all what I can think of right now, you could use them if you like.

Anyways, GOOD LUCK with your game!

 

[Krazy_Meerkat]

I know it's VERY hard to draw from scratch with a mouse. It would be MUCH easier if done with a pen mouse though. It's like a pencil. Anyways, would you like some names? Here are some:
Fire type:
Burnbird
Figon (Fire + Dragon)
Grass Type:
Grasleef
Foreflower

That's all what I can think of right now, you could use them if you like.

Anyways, GOOD LUCK with your game!

I think Fragon would sound better than Figon

 

[Dawson]

Yeah, Fragon does sound better. But did rubyrulez even ask for help with names? Did he even say that there'll be a Fire Dragon Pokemon?

 

[Krazy_Meerkat]

I was just giving him my opinion.. He didn't have to do anything

 

[rubyrulez]

Yeah, Fragon does sound better. But did rubyrulez even ask for help with names? Did he even say that there'll be a Fire Dragon Pokemon?

Actually, although I do have a lot of names and a lot of ideas, a few extra names wouldn't hurt. I do agree that Fragon is good, but the name is very similar to Flygon, so I might need to tweak that a bit. I like that idea for a legendary, thanks! :D

 

[Peekimon]

< OFF TOPIC >
Umm, Phoenix, I was just giving some suggestions...
< ON TOPIC >
Umm, how many characters could you play in this game?
Like, will you have 2 sets of males/females?

 

[Dawson]

I wasn't complaining if that was what you were thinking. I was just asking if rubyrulez wanted names since people had started giving out names.

 

[Peekimon]

OFF TOPIC:
Oh, ok, sorry for the misunderstanding.

 

[rubyrulez]

< OFF TOPIC >
Umm, Phoenix, I was just giving some suggestions...
< ON TOPIC >
Umm, how many characters could you play in this game?
Like, will you have 2 sets of males/females?

Yes, and thank you for your suggestions. As I said, I do like the idea of a Fire/Dragon type for a legendary, just wanted to change the -gon at the end of his name to somethiong else. As for the characters, the hero/rival system will be the same as R/S, but the Hero and Rival live in different towns. This si the first game where you live in a town where the lab and your rival isn't...

 

[Munchy the Munchlax]

yeah, the fire dragon sounds like a good idea to me.