Pokemon Neotic

[Cursed]

This is my first game, and while starting I kept asking "Why? Why make a pokemon game now?" Then it hit me. *Sticks head out car window to see something and hits head on mailboxes* I wanted to create myself a challenge. Rm2k3 was perfect. Here I am now.

Story: The hero (you) was having an all-night movie party with his/her friends. When (s)he wakes up, (s)he's on the floor. As (s)he was waking up, a man named Mr. Toshiba calls for you. He lives in Mangrove forest. After getting on your gear, you go to the forest to meet him...

Screen 1: Talking to your friend.

Features:
15 Cursetendo promotions
All new Neotic reigon
Cipher returns
New League rules
All 390 pokemon

Note: This game will be made using Rm2k3

Yes, I'll take all the help I can get. I'll give credit.

 

[Sceptile_Master]

The start of your plot sounds a little odd but it's OK. The map is far too plain though. Also you probably want to patch up your rm2k3 font.

 

[Cursed]

Of course it's plain, you were robbed.

Edit: I fixed the font.

 

[Peekimon]

Ah, but, should't you give it the "robbed" feeling? Like, footprints, broken stuff, etc. It sounds nice, but the screen is too bare.

 

[Jeff_PKLight]

Yeah, it looks plain, but also, you should add some borders to the room, to give it a pokemon feel. The room's too huge.

The story sounds cool, but I don't really get the 'going to the forest to meet him' thing.

Good luck with your game, though! :)

 

[Cursed]

You're right. I should at least get rid of the high-tech thingy. (Who would steal a bed and not a high-tech doohickey?)

 

[Peekimon]

Well, techincally, yes, and make the "stolen" feeling act out. Foot prints, broken stuff, etc.

 

[Cursed]

I dropped the whole "Robbed" thing. I just have no way of making it work. Instead, this is the living/dining room.

I'm doing more work than I normally do in three days. Lol.

 

[D-jo4000]

The room is still to bare. And why did you stop typing "Glooba" ?

 

[Superiority]

add a black border to the room to make it look better

 

[Sceptile_Master]

I thought you said you fixed the font.

 

[Sorye HK]

I think that you should work on filling up the map a bit more.

 

[Cursed]

Everybody's a critic :(

 

[DarkMage31]

Just offering helpful advice.

Also, why doesn't the hero have eyes? I do believe that is my Hiro sprite I made, and that looks like the blinking pose.

 

[Cursed]

He's not the hero, the guy below him is. His eyes are closed. I found Hiro's image buried in my old project pile.
Edit: AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Photobucket is down!!!!!

 

[Cursed]

Sorry, I think I double posted. A screen of your bedroom/living/dining room.

 

[the O rly? owl]

Wow, a blind hero - Me likes, Me likes :P

 

[Sceptile_Master]

Well that's better than the last one. Also have you sorted the font yet?

 

[Prof Plum]

Good, good, but still there are parts of it (like the bottom right hand corner) that are too empty.

 

[Datriot]

The basic plot seems okay, the hero looks okay, have you anymore screenies to show us?