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Pokemon: Revenge (PG 13: minor violence and lauguage)
This is the first finished chapter of my Pokémon fan fiction called Pokémon: Revenge
Collaboration with Sloofish
Credits:
Pokémon copyrighted to Nintendo
Written and posted by Hiidora
Pictures drawn by Sloofish
Characters by Sloofish & Hiidora
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Episode 01 - Fear Factor!
Looking out the window, Pink would lay her head lightly on her crossed arms. She stared out at the forest beyond Hearthome with heavy eyes.
"Soon I'll be turning ten" the young girl said quietly.
"You should consider that a good thing!" Shouted Purple from the doorway. Pink quickly turned toward her with an angry look on her face.
"Can't you knock?" Her look faded, her eyes tearing up abit.
Purple frowned and walked over to Pink. Purple crouched down to meet her at eye-level "As a previous trainer, I should know. It's nothing bad at all, Pink" Purple said calmly... which was abnormal for her. "You should look forward to becoming a train-"
"No!" Shouted Pink as she pulled her hand up to her chest "I would never--Never do such a thing. I couldn't ever do that!".
Purple stood up as she heard a woman calling from downstairs "Dinner's ready!". Purple looked at the door then to Pink. A worried look on her face.
"Pink, I won't force this on you but you'll have to cheer up soon. You've been moping around for the past month now!" Shouted Purple, her usual pout-y face returning. Pink smiled slightly.
Pink didn't say anything yet she gave Purple a bright smile to signal that all was well before she and purple rushed down the stairs to get something to eat.
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Pink (Is almost ten) has lived in this orphanage since she was five. Pink's shoulder-length powder pink hair and pink eyes were definitely what earned her her name. Wearing a mid-drift red and black striped tee-shirt and beige pants with a bright pink belt. Pink shoes. It was definitely her favourite colour as well.
Purple (Is twenty-six) was a bit sloppier. She has slightly messy purple hair---shorter then Pink's. With purple eyes and a black tank top. Grey baggy pants with a hole in one knee. She even adorned her feet with a pair of mismatch yellow and blue roller skates.
Her skin tainted with ink; A tattoo of a star on one arm and a moon on the other to represent Umbreon and Espeon, the lunar and solar evolutions.
Purple's past is unknown to Pink. As far as she knows, Purple came all the way from the Johto region to Sinnoh in order to assist her cousins and soon came to this orphanage... why? A few months later and she has already grown a bond with Pink.
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Pink's POV TIME!
I sat uncomfortably at my seat, listening to all these other kids chatting about how their Pokémon journeys were going to start soon. I couldn't believe how many kids would give up their lives only to abuse Pokémon. "Nonsense" I mumbled quietly.
"Did you say something?" I heard a girl ask from across the table. Which made me to pause. "N-n-No!. Nothing.."
"Heheheh" I laughed in a high-pitched way and they turned back to there conversation like I was some kind of alien.
The second my food was finished up I stood up and ran back up to my room filled with rage. I couldn't believe that so many children would do such things to these innocent creatures! I thought as I punched my pillow with frustration.
"They acted so happy about it, too". I sat down on my bed with a loud sigh. What am I to judge them? I should just let them do as they please.. no matter how much it annoys me.
My three room-mates came walking into my room. Dressed in their matching pink pajamas sent me the message that it was time for bed. So I decided to get up and change. In my sloppily applied striped shirt and a pair of baggy beige pants I laid down. Maybe if I got myself some sleep I'd feel better tomorrow.
I nodded off to sleep with a smile on my face.
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Purple POV time!
I slept happily all up until I heard a loud bang followed by all of the girls upstairs screaming and falling out of bed like idiots.
I snapped awake and jumped out of my bed. Those idiots probably blew up something important this time. I rushed out of my room and up the stairs.
Wearing my black long tee as a night gown. I burst into the room knowing the girls probably did do something stupid. "Are you girls okay?" I asked as I pretended to care. "W-We heard a loud noise!" I got as a response.
"Hmm. I'll go check it ou-" I was interrupted "I'll do it!" shouted Pink as she jumped from her bed.
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Pink's POV TIME!
Purple glanced at me, a slightly confused look on her face. "Why?" she asked me, "B- Because.. JUST BECAUSE!" I shouted at her in response.
Purple got even more confused than before! She told me "Fine fine, just try not to get hurt." She waved her hand at me and walked out of the room.. probably back to bed.
I opened the front door and looked out at the dark, quiet scenery. I gulped and slowly forced myself to move forward and into the night in the direction the noises were heard.
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Suddenly, someone smacked me in the back of the head! I turned around to find I was actually hit with a poke ball and it was thrown by a green haired boy.. probably no older than I was standing just a few feet away.
"Wh-Who are you?!" I demanded he give a name to himself. He gave me a cold glare "Arkain" he said calmly. "What are you doing out here? It's Dangerous!" "Is it really any of your business?" He said in slightly less calm manor. I think he was mad at me.
I spotted something in his hand! He was holding a backpack crammed full of poke balls. I asked "All those Poke balls.." quietly "Where did you get them from?"
"Again.. this your business, why?" losing a bit more of his calm.
I looked down and shadow covered my eyes "Only about fifteen feet" He blinked and questioned me, "What?" He appeared to be confused at my statement. "Only fifteen feet away from the Pokémon Center!", I was sure of what he had done when his eyes widened and he backed up a few steps.
"YOU STOLE THOSE POKéMON!" I shouted and he turned to run. But, I grabbed onto his hand. "You.. You--"
"YOU THIEF!! Return those Pokémon before I turn you in!" "Hmmp" He huffs quietly. Reaching into his bag, he pulls out two Poke balls, releasing Turtwig and Kricketune.
I released his hand and backed up a little bit. "Kricketune, Use Sing.." He said calmly as the Kricketune began to rub it's small red arms to together to create a soft mysterious sound.
My breathing became heavy, I got really tired and I tried to cover my ears. But, I wasn't fast enough. I lost consciousness and fell backward.
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A turtwig had probably used Grass Knot on me and tied my arms behind my back. That was the first thing I had noticed when I woke up. The second thing I noticed was, I was in a shed. "Wh-.. Where am.. I?" I said and I glanced around, still not conscious enough to really understand most of what was going on at this moment.
The green haired boy returned. He around and gave me a cold glare that made me shiver just by the sight of it. I glanced up at him fearfully "You're not gonna make me fall and pass out again, .. are you?"
"You're not going to make me again, are you?" He answered back, I could tell he was annoyed.
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The boy had messy--spiky green hair that just about reached his shoulders and had creepy red eyes. He wore a black jacket with red streaks going down either arm and on it's sides, He had a blue shirt under-neath that and had on light blue shorts with a golden belt, he had black and Grey sneakers and appeared my age.
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"H-. Hey Can You let me go?".(If he let her go then she would call officer Jenny..) He huffed and turned back to a table covered in the Poke balls he stole.
"Why did you want so many Pokémon?" tried to get something out of him. He face palmed in annoyance and answered me "I'll repeat myself. Is It any of your business what I'm doing and why?" He began to sort through the pile of balls Impatiently..
I gritted my teeth "Are you just going to leave me here?" I Mumbled. after hearing a sniffle, He glanced back at me, Only to see that I was starting to cry. He shrugged at me "U-.. uh.."
"Wh- why are you crying?" He asked in a confused tone "I don't wanna die" I mumbled out as tears crept down my cheeks.
He sighed "Your not gonna die." , "T- Then what's going to happen to me?" I looked up at him. He knelled down and pulled the vines away the held my hands and feet together "Your going to leave, And not tell anybody what you saw tonight".
He stood back up and reached his hand out to me, glaring in the other direction. I gladly smiled at him and grabbed him by the front of his shirt, yanking him down to eye-view "Fooled you" I said quietly.
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To be continued whenever I get my first reply. ^^
Collaboration with Sloofish
Credits:
Pokémon copyrighted to Nintendo
Written and posted by Hiidora
Pictures drawn by Sloofish
Characters by Sloofish & Hiidora
_________________________________________________________
Episode 01 - Fear Factor!
Looking out the window, Pink would lay her head lightly on her crossed arms. She stared out at the forest beyond Hearthome with heavy eyes.
"Soon I'll be turning ten" the young girl said quietly.
"You should consider that a good thing!" Shouted Purple from the doorway. Pink quickly turned toward her with an angry look on her face.
"Can't you knock?" Her look faded, her eyes tearing up abit.
Purple frowned and walked over to Pink. Purple crouched down to meet her at eye-level "As a previous trainer, I should know. It's nothing bad at all, Pink" Purple said calmly... which was abnormal for her. "You should look forward to becoming a train-"
"No!" Shouted Pink as she pulled her hand up to her chest "I would never--Never do such a thing. I couldn't ever do that!".
Purple stood up as she heard a woman calling from downstairs "Dinner's ready!". Purple looked at the door then to Pink. A worried look on her face.
"Pink, I won't force this on you but you'll have to cheer up soon. You've been moping around for the past month now!" Shouted Purple, her usual pout-y face returning. Pink smiled slightly.
Pink didn't say anything yet she gave Purple a bright smile to signal that all was well before she and purple rushed down the stairs to get something to eat.
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Pink (Is almost ten) has lived in this orphanage since she was five. Pink's shoulder-length powder pink hair and pink eyes were definitely what earned her her name. Wearing a mid-drift red and black striped tee-shirt and beige pants with a bright pink belt. Pink shoes. It was definitely her favourite colour as well.
Purple (Is twenty-six) was a bit sloppier. She has slightly messy purple hair---shorter then Pink's. With purple eyes and a black tank top. Grey baggy pants with a hole in one knee. She even adorned her feet with a pair of mismatch yellow and blue roller skates.
Her skin tainted with ink; A tattoo of a star on one arm and a moon on the other to represent Umbreon and Espeon, the lunar and solar evolutions.
Purple's past is unknown to Pink. As far as she knows, Purple came all the way from the Johto region to Sinnoh in order to assist her cousins and soon came to this orphanage... why? A few months later and she has already grown a bond with Pink.
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Pink's POV TIME!
I sat uncomfortably at my seat, listening to all these other kids chatting about how their Pokémon journeys were going to start soon. I couldn't believe how many kids would give up their lives only to abuse Pokémon. "Nonsense" I mumbled quietly.
"Did you say something?" I heard a girl ask from across the table. Which made me to pause. "N-n-No!. Nothing.."
"Heheheh" I laughed in a high-pitched way and they turned back to there conversation like I was some kind of alien.
The second my food was finished up I stood up and ran back up to my room filled with rage. I couldn't believe that so many children would do such things to these innocent creatures! I thought as I punched my pillow with frustration.
"They acted so happy about it, too". I sat down on my bed with a loud sigh. What am I to judge them? I should just let them do as they please.. no matter how much it annoys me.
My three room-mates came walking into my room. Dressed in their matching pink pajamas sent me the message that it was time for bed. So I decided to get up and change. In my sloppily applied striped shirt and a pair of baggy beige pants I laid down. Maybe if I got myself some sleep I'd feel better tomorrow.
I nodded off to sleep with a smile on my face.
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Purple POV time!
I slept happily all up until I heard a loud bang followed by all of the girls upstairs screaming and falling out of bed like idiots.
I snapped awake and jumped out of my bed. Those idiots probably blew up something important this time. I rushed out of my room and up the stairs.
Wearing my black long tee as a night gown. I burst into the room knowing the girls probably did do something stupid. "Are you girls okay?" I asked as I pretended to care. "W-We heard a loud noise!" I got as a response.
"Hmm. I'll go check it ou-" I was interrupted "I'll do it!" shouted Pink as she jumped from her bed.
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Pink's POV TIME!
Purple glanced at me, a slightly confused look on her face. "Why?" she asked me, "B- Because.. JUST BECAUSE!" I shouted at her in response.
Purple got even more confused than before! She told me "Fine fine, just try not to get hurt." She waved her hand at me and walked out of the room.. probably back to bed.
I opened the front door and looked out at the dark, quiet scenery. I gulped and slowly forced myself to move forward and into the night in the direction the noises were heard.
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Suddenly, someone smacked me in the back of the head! I turned around to find I was actually hit with a poke ball and it was thrown by a green haired boy.. probably no older than I was standing just a few feet away.
"Wh-Who are you?!" I demanded he give a name to himself. He gave me a cold glare "Arkain" he said calmly. "What are you doing out here? It's Dangerous!" "Is it really any of your business?" He said in slightly less calm manor. I think he was mad at me.
I spotted something in his hand! He was holding a backpack crammed full of poke balls. I asked "All those Poke balls.." quietly "Where did you get them from?"
"Again.. this your business, why?" losing a bit more of his calm.
I looked down and shadow covered my eyes "Only about fifteen feet" He blinked and questioned me, "What?" He appeared to be confused at my statement. "Only fifteen feet away from the Pokémon Center!", I was sure of what he had done when his eyes widened and he backed up a few steps.
"YOU STOLE THOSE POKéMON!" I shouted and he turned to run. But, I grabbed onto his hand. "You.. You--"
"YOU THIEF!! Return those Pokémon before I turn you in!" "Hmmp" He huffs quietly. Reaching into his bag, he pulls out two Poke balls, releasing Turtwig and Kricketune.
I released his hand and backed up a little bit. "Kricketune, Use Sing.." He said calmly as the Kricketune began to rub it's small red arms to together to create a soft mysterious sound.
My breathing became heavy, I got really tired and I tried to cover my ears. But, I wasn't fast enough. I lost consciousness and fell backward.
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A turtwig had probably used Grass Knot on me and tied my arms behind my back. That was the first thing I had noticed when I woke up. The second thing I noticed was, I was in a shed. "Wh-.. Where am.. I?" I said and I glanced around, still not conscious enough to really understand most of what was going on at this moment.
The green haired boy returned. He around and gave me a cold glare that made me shiver just by the sight of it. I glanced up at him fearfully "You're not gonna make me fall and pass out again, .. are you?"
"You're not going to make me again, are you?" He answered back, I could tell he was annoyed.
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The boy had messy--spiky green hair that just about reached his shoulders and had creepy red eyes. He wore a black jacket with red streaks going down either arm and on it's sides, He had a blue shirt under-neath that and had on light blue shorts with a golden belt, he had black and Grey sneakers and appeared my age.
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"H-. Hey Can You let me go?".(If he let her go then she would call officer Jenny..) He huffed and turned back to a table covered in the Poke balls he stole.
"Why did you want so many Pokémon?" tried to get something out of him. He face palmed in annoyance and answered me "I'll repeat myself. Is It any of your business what I'm doing and why?" He began to sort through the pile of balls Impatiently..
I gritted my teeth "Are you just going to leave me here?" I Mumbled. after hearing a sniffle, He glanced back at me, Only to see that I was starting to cry. He shrugged at me "U-.. uh.."
"Wh- why are you crying?" He asked in a confused tone "I don't wanna die" I mumbled out as tears crept down my cheeks.
He sighed "Your not gonna die." , "T- Then what's going to happen to me?" I looked up at him. He knelled down and pulled the vines away the held my hands and feet together "Your going to leave, And not tell anybody what you saw tonight".
He stood back up and reached his hand out to me, glaring in the other direction. I gladly smiled at him and grabbed him by the front of his shirt, yanking him down to eye-view "Fooled you" I said quietly.
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To be continued whenever I get my first reply. ^^
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