lol, it has an awsome backround, and you got awsome sprites, all you need to do is just make their bubbles bigger so we can read what they're saying, and maybe make the joke a little easier to understand, like maybe show Link advancing to get his wand, but stops and then farts XD and maybe have him say "works every time" and show the guard chasing him. It's a great comic, you just need more cause and effect sort of thing, but for a first comic it was pretty good ^_^