The Region Beyond Johto

[Tsukasa]

Yes yes i know another sprite comic by me,though the others one have failed(and need to be closed)i neverthought they would make it anyways but i acutally put alot of time into this one and this is a comic i got a good feel for,such as im going to stick doing this well here it is comments,reviews,anything is accepted

Sprites credit goes to Serebii.net Overworld Archive Thread
BackSprite of Gold done by me
Credit goes to Sprites Resources for the mapping.

Plot/Character(s) Updated

Page One
Page Two
Page Three
Page Four
Page Five
Page Six
Page Seven
Page Eight
Also If you want to be in the comic fill this out
Name:
Sprite sheet:
Pokemon: (Max 4 for now)

 

[Adam_148]

This is good, this has a lot of potential, keep going and this will become really good

 

[Smarties-chan]

This looks promising can I join?
Name: Kaguro
Sheet:

Pokemon:
Totodile
Surf
Hidden power (it's ground type)
Slash
Scary face

Sudowoodo
Counter
Rock slide
Earthquake
Low kick

Shuckle
Sludge bomb
Earthquake
Rockslide
Rest

Dunsparce
Counter
Body slam
Rock slide
Shadow ball.

And if you don't mind I'd like to tell you a little about this character:
Little is known about this young pokemonmaster, she is very silent, but when she speaks people ought to listen because she never repeats what she says and she is cunning both in pokemon training and pokemon knowledge she has beaten 4 different pokeleagues and roams the lands seeking after strong trainers the only ones she speeks kindly to are her pokemon wich she treats with loving care her pokemon are ruthlessly strong and katsuro is known for going easy at the beggining and when her opponent gets over confident she strikes hard, her pokemon are trained to the extreme her totodile is known for being as strong as a feraligatr and her shuckle is the strongest of its kind.

 

[Eon-Rider]

The text doesn't look very good all bunched up...
It is alright so far...

 

[Jarman]

USE NORMAL SPEECH BUBBLES. You have no idea who's talking (usually if it's a minor character that is with a bunch of people that are similar to them, like rocket grunts) and it's for lazy people.

 

[Tsukasa]

Alright page three and four are now up couldnt post for the last two days because i was at boxing practice,anyways there they are.

 

[Alana]

I like this. ^_^ I hope you continue the good work. I may join but I don't have a sprite sheet so I might want to get one.

 

[Jarman]

Use proper grammar and don't put a lot of black space in the comics.

 

[Tsukasa]

Use proper grammar and don't put a lot of black space in the comics.

Jarman seriously STFU i really dont care for your opinion,you act like a SA too much

 

[StarryLatiasGirl]

Hey, if it's not too much trouble, can I be in?

Name: Koji Dragoon

Sprites- Click Here

Pokemon- Houndour/Houndoom aka "Pyra" (she has customized sprites)

Other- Other- A few years ago, he was captured by the Neo Rockets and infused with Rayquaza DNA. He now travels the country with his Houndour. He can turn into a low-level Rayquaza at will, but he still has his hair and goggles on his Pokemon form. He also can fly and use Fire, Ice, Electric, and Dragon attacks when he is in his Pokemon form. He dislikes large crowds, is good at making friends, and likes to tell jokes, but is pretty bad at doing so.

Hope I can be in!

~Ho-Oh

 

[Jarman]

Jarman seriously STFU i really dont care for your opinion,you act like a SA too much

Who's SA? And if you don't care about people's opinions, don't post your comics.

 

[Tsukasa]

Who's SA? And if you don't care about people's opinions, don't post your comics.

No dude its just you,you get on my **** nerves dont post in my threads

 

[Karasuma]

No dude its just you,you get on my **** nerves dont post in my threads

Sukasa, Why do you always gotta be a F***** M*********** A******** we all like your threads but instead you curse at us. You even gave me a bad rep U ****** A**********!!!!!!!1 :badsmile:

 

[Avatar]

No dude its just you,you get on my **** nerves dont post in my threads

When you post your sprite comics here, EVERYONE are allowed to post their opinion. Be it positive or negative.
You can't tell someone that they can't post in your thread because their opinion doesn't suit you.

Also, I'm surprised you haven't been caught by a mod yet for leaving out credit on the Gold sprite.

 

[Karasuma]

When you post your sprite comics here, EVERYONE are allowed to post their opinion. Be it positive or negative.
You can't tell someone that they can't post in your thread because their opinion doesn't suit you.

Thanks Avatar, I knew somebody understood me.

 

[Tsukasa]

When you post your sprite comics here, EVERYONE are allowed to post their opinion. Be it positive or negative.
You can't tell someone that they can't post in your thread because their opinion doesn't suit you.

Also, I'm surprised you haven't been caught by a mod yet for leaving out credit on the Gold sprite.

Yea i forgot to put credit,i was in a hurry to post the thread.

Hey, if it's not too much trouble, can I be in?

Name: Koji Dragoon

Sprites- Click Here

Pokemon- Houndour/Houndoom aka "Pyra" (she has customized sprites)

Other- Other- A few years ago, he was captured by the Neo Rockets and infused with Rayquaza DNA. He now travels the country with his Houndour. He can turn into a low-level Rayquaza at will, but he still has his hair and goggles on his Pokemon form. He also can fly and use Fire, Ice, Electric, and Dragon attacks when he is in his Pokemon form. He dislikes large crowds, is good at making friends, and likes to tell jokes, but is pretty bad at doing so.

Hope I can be in!

~Ho-Oh

Yea im going to add you very soon,On a quick note page five,six,seven,and eight are up,the plot/character(s) has been updated also

 

[Draik]

I hate this comic.
Your grammer sucks, usually people talk in normal capitalization.
There needs to be a space in between the colon and the words.
Your positioning is off, sprites are either on or off tiles.

 

[Smarties-chan]

At the beggining I thought your comic was pretty good even with the bad grammar, but right now it just doesn't make any sense why the heck is there a house that looks like a museum in the middle of pallet town? It just doesn't make any sense, the battle scene is really messy first of all the hp thingy is always green and not being able to see the number of hp ticks me off too and I don't see any point in why red challenged gold and putting
Gold: or Red: to show who's speaking is a big no no, what do you have the colors for then? It looked pretty good at the beggining, but you ruined the comic I hope you're able to save it...

 

[Esupio]

Jarman seriously STFU i really dont care for your opinion,you act like a SA too much

learn to take critisim dude your going over the top and maybe one day you'll flip out one last time

 

[Smarties-chan]

Blazin Espio is right. If you want to make a good comic you should take other people's critisism and learn from it.