View Full Version : Die for Love

September 28th, 2007, 7:43 PM
I sit in the park where I dwell,
For this girl I love so well.

She took my heart away from me,
But now she wants to set me free.

I ran home to cry on my bed.
Not a word to my mother was said.

My father came home late that night.
He looked at me from left to right.

He saw me hanging from a rope.

He took out a knife to cut me down,
And on my shirt a note a note was found.

"Dig my grave and dig it deep.
Dig my grave from head to feet,
And on the top place a dove.
Remember this: I died for love."
This actually happened in the past.

September 28th, 2007, 10:03 PM
aww *cries* thats so sad!

September 29th, 2007, 7:10 PM
It is pretty sad that some guy loves a girl so much that he can't live without her.

September 29th, 2007, 10:59 PM
wow.. such a deep poem...

September 30th, 2007, 3:06 PM
wow.. such a deep poem...

Um, no, Not a deep poem for me.

You see, I have seen so many poems like this in one day it wasn't funny.

Anyway, another thing is, that thesarus is a best friend-use him.

Ah, I can't say anything else really, good luck with less cliche meanings.

(By the way, you cna have a cliche meaning but you have to expain it in a diffrent way from the norm.)

(Oh, and I have cliche meanings at times too)