Love

Lumine

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    Started this one a couple of days ago and finished it earlier today

    A true love..

    A true love is a sacred endless flame
    That burns magically and eternally,
    And nothing can dim its special glow
    Or change its lone destiny.
    A true love speaks in tender and soft tones
    And hears with gentle ear,
    A true love gives with open heart
    And true love fears nothing.
    A true love makes no harsh demands
    It neither rules nor binds,
    A true love holds with gentle hands
    The hearts that it entwines.



    What did you say? oh it sucks? sorry I'll try harder next time =\
     
    I love this poem, Danny, it's so lovely. It has a lot of meaning; a perfect description of true love. Perfect! =P I absolutely love the last few lines <3

    What did you say? oh it sucks? sorry I'll try harder next time =\

    ¬_¬ I asked you not to say things like that.
     
    Awesome my first ever positive comment =P thanks Nikki <3



    Btw I just felt like posting the poem I gave you a while ago =|


    I never felt a love
    Like this before
    It's a love like no other
    Something I have always wished for

    A love with honesty
    Humour and heart
    An invisible knot so strong
    It would never part

    A love that makes us smile
    From eye to eye
    A love that is joyful
    Without any lie

    A love that is beautiful
    From the inside and out
    A love with no tears,
    Pain, or doubt

    A love with soul
    So tender and true
    A love that I have found
    Only in you..
     
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