French Kiss by Dizzy

French Kiss is a song I'm writing right now with my friend Rita, we plan on starting a band (again) but what else is new, So far, I have this, please read, and give me a reply if you like it. Please don't leave me hangin!


French Kiss

Introduction -

French ****ing Kiss, who woulda knew it would be Bliss
I seriously don't know about this, but It was a French Kiss...

FRENCH
****ING
KISS

I was dancin' with the devil when it happened that Day.
It's all your fault, and now your going to pay (Yes you are!)
I thought you loved me, I thought we were alright
But now all I feel is regret everytime we fight

You see, I don't want if uh, you don't got it
and uh, you don't got it so, uh I don't want it.
No one cares for me like you DID and now
I'm about to throw my life away (WOW)


We have horrible writing skills :(

ummmm that was new. *re reads that song
well it was ok but not something i would get in to realy. Though just me Dizzy. Also i would have to hear it rather than just read it to realy know if i like it or not.

that was greet dizzy i kida had a thought of how the music went it was real good.do you have any more songs that you and your friend are doing?

I had a CD somewhere, I just don't know where, and all the songs I wrote I gave the lyrics to my friends when I left the band.. I'm going to have to find that CD

Umm what genre is it like? Rock? If I knew that I could sorta "visualize(?)" it better..

Its really a Techno, because we can't do rock (my friend has rock band-_-)

Blah I wish to get a band started someday, but I'm too stupid and young..

Anyways I can better visualize it now, it seems pretty fitting. How many songs have you written so far?

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Good idea for a poem, it would be a good song if you sang it! :laugh: