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Glitter Stain
December 13th, 2008, 4:14 PM
My soldier, you hath relented
Your body intact but your soul segmented
At Satan's wrath did you fall
Under his shadow did you crawl
A lesson so learnt
Your frame as such burnt
Spiteful, you may be
As to send his weapon to sea
You hate him now, but then not so
His shameless enemy you owe
Pray tonight, he detaches
My soldier, put down those matches

December 14th, 2008, 8:07 PM
Hmm. Very nice. The ryhme scheme went well, in my opinion. Creates a vivid image as well, I might add.