Peom recommeded for some of the older kids

Rave Master

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    here is a peom i made up, not recommeded for young kids:

    here it is:

    There is a bobcat in a mountain
    A bird in a tree

    I drink a mountain dew
    then i take a pee

    Gunna go upstairs
    Get myself some chow

    Guna have some s*x
    right about now

    When u go upstairs
    then u will see
    a beautiful girl
    doing it with me!

    let me know what u think
     
    how intersting, very creative, although u r young!! =)
     
    x_x I can't tell you what I really think because there are young children about. But in short this is trash, sorry it just is. Its total dribble, a bastardization of a beautiful art form. A trained monkey could pump out something more meaningful given a typewriter and 20 minutes...
     
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