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PKMN Trainer Alison
September 13th, 2010, 1:58 AM
Scratch. http://i405.photobucket.com/albums/pp133/ember_da_dragon/001Kitturn.pnghttp://i405.photobucket.com/albums/pp133/ember_da_dragon/009Unycorn.pnghttp://i405.photobucket.com/albums/pp133/ember_da_dragon/Munerang_Scratch_Sprite_by_Pokemon_Rose.pnghttp://i405.photobucket.com/albums/pp133/ember_da_dragon/dfgrewg.png

Revamps http://i405.photobucket.com/albums/pp133/ember_da_dragon/Pikachu.pnghttp://i405.photobucket.com/albums/pp133/ember_da_dragon/Lapras-1.png

Merged http://i405.photobucket.com/albums/pp133/ember_da_dragon/My_First_Pokemon_Sprite_by_Pokemon_Rose.pnghttp://i405.photobucket.com/albums/pp133/ember_da_dragon/Meet_Herba__The_grass_starter__by_Pokemon_Rose.png

Hope these look okay ^^' This is the first time i have posted my work on a site, Well... Besides DA.

Critique would be appreciated, I'd love to know how to improve.
(I'd post more but some are big and won't work with the smaller ones)

September 13th, 2010, 11:13 AM
If I wasn't pressed for time I'd actually give you some feedback, but for now it's just business. Meaning I moved your thread over to the main Pixel Art forum where we keep the showcase threads (Projects is for games and shops and things). Now, the rules say you need 4 pieces of original, non-fusion/recolor/revamp/etc. work to start a thread here and you only have three, but it can stay here for a little while at least so you can add something else.

PKMN Trainer Alison
September 14th, 2010, 3:24 AM
:) Thanks a bunch, I'll Just resized one of my Scratch's so i'll just pop that in there in a sec.

September 14th, 2010, 7:35 AM
My first impressions are that the outlines are somewhat light on the first two sprites. The fire-fox (?) has a very light outline around most of it and it would be more of a problem if the shading wheren't there. As it is the shading gives a pretty good sense of depth so good job on that. The unicorn looks kind of rough in the horn area and the shape of the head doesn't quite look right to me. The legs are varying in size, too, and I'm not sure if you can have that one crossing over the way it does. Also note the pixel in the tail (there's one in the fox's ear as well) where the background color is missing.

PKMN Trainer Alison
September 15th, 2010, 1:34 AM
:) Thanks, I'll be sure to take all of that into account with newer sprites.

Lord Varion
September 15th, 2010, 2:18 AM
This one looks a little shadless i think it could use with some more shading
and i love your pikachu revamp :P