Well, I've read chapter one so far, and I have to say the whole idea about this fic is great.
This fic is showing the true American dream, to be a pop star. ^_~ I love how it begins: a smalltown boy entering his twenties with a dream to become the best. He works a minimum wage yet seems to never waver in his conscience that he'll once day reach his goals.
I think your plot is starting out good and you have a good form of vocabulary and spelling and such. ^_____^ Well, I'll report back once I get the chance the read other chapters. Until then, keep up the great work. ^^
~Kelsey
