View Full Version : ~a la cruz~

February 28th, 2005, 1:13 PM
i'm here for you all to see
a spectacle, shunned and scorned.
this was always meant to be
my death fortlold before i was born.
i look to you, you look away.
have you forgotten me, my friend?
You denied me yesterday,
you said you'd be here to the end...
Some cry at me feet,
some laugh at my pain.
I carried it through the street
I cried with disdain.
torn by whips,
pierced by nails.
I stumble and trip
to save you from hell...
Why have you forsaken me...?

this is a religiously inspired poem...i'm not the best person morally, and i even admit this is wierdf coming from me,but sometimes i remember my beliefs, even if i sometimes doubt them...

crazed flareon
February 28th, 2005, 1:26 PM
I think it's flow is perfect, I think you need to post more!

February 28th, 2005, 1:51 PM
thanx i have a lot of poems in my book...i'm just so lazy ;_____;