1989-2005 R.I.P. Here lies Jeremy's crediblity! XD

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Jeremy

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    Hey sweeties, I made this poem because I was bored...Again. XD Umm, enjoy? ^^;

    ~You Don't Know Me~

    When you look into my eyes, what do you see?
    Just some teenager trying to be free
    But I'm not a teenager and I'll never would
    I'm not even ready to face adulthood
    I'm just some child stuck in a adolesant's body
    I'm not ready to love, hate, or hurt anybody
    I just try to live my life day by day
    What the heck do you think I'm gay?!
    Look, sweetie, you ain't got the right to judge
    So don't mess with fighter who holds a grudge
    I'm stuck in my own fantasy little land
    Just playing games and doing things that I can
    Sometimes think intellectually in the right time
    Sometimes I act like I'm out of my mind
    Some people say I'm a crazy fool
    Some people say I'm cute and cool
    Others say I'm sensative and sweet
    Others say I'm mean and weak
    But words are just words, and they can't hurt me
    Just don't get my family involved and you'll see
    Not only I have wisdom and mind
    I can also whoop your lil behind
    So I don't care how bad you think of me
    Cause brother...You don't know me.​

    Hehehe, that was awful. XD
     
    o.o It was kind abad at some parts like "Not only I have wisdom and mind, I can also whoop your lil behind" where it seems to skip from one way to another but besides that it's pretty nice, Jeremy.
     
    coughcough Well we all know who this poem is for. I don't even have to say it. ~.^ It was okay, but it sorta reminded me of my poem at some points.
     
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