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March 6th, 2005, 3:57 PM
Sort of a continuation of "Regret". Let's just say the person died because they comitted suicide, it would make alot of sense, plus that's what I had in mind. It would probably be what would happen if I commited suicide and you found out. You wouldn't care.

You were afraid to let it show
I was forgotten so long ago
You didn't seem to care when I died
Never shed a tear, never have you cried

I am cursed by the fact that you don't care
But why I should I worry, you were never there
No one felt sorrow for my abscence, I see
I shoudn't care, no one ever loved me

You seemed to love me before my fall
Now you're not missing me at all
Maybe my death was just too soon
Maybe I shouldn't have died for you

Was I so unimportant to leave?
Please, doesn't anyone care about me?
Nobody really loved me then
I guess I won't go home again

Isn't something not there?
Doesn't anybody care?
Thanks to the love that was never shown
I am here, all alone

I am forgotten, forever to lay
Lay to rest, for every dawning day
Six feet under, my body lies dead
But my spirit is drowning in something never said

Why, why did you forget me?

March 6th, 2005, 4:08 PM
We Woah sweetie...That was depressing... It's good...And it kinda reminded me of a certain event...

March 7th, 2005, 4:51 PM
I really like this kind of poem. You're very good at writing. Seriously.
Any more..?

Khaos Angel
March 9th, 2005, 6:47 PM
o.o We'd miss you if you committed suicide. Like Jeremy said, it was a rather depressing poem but good none the less.

March 12th, 2005, 11:16 AM
Awwwwws, Ashlein! <3 *huggles* I would be so horrified and saddened if you were to take you own life. ;o;

This poem shows how a lot of people feel. They feel as thougb people don't notice them or don't even care that they walk the path they've chosen.

You sometimes feel isolated, and unworthy to even breathe the precious air and feel the glistening sun on your skin. These kinds of feelings often lead to drub abuse and even suicide. It's truly a sad thing to see. Everyone deserves to live, and everyone deserves to be loved. <3

Great work Ashlein, I loved this poem as did I all your other works. ^.~