Take Me Away

Take Me Away (From Here)

These are song lyrics for my band Ace of Paine. It's about death, being hunted down and murdered...

()'s means rapped
[]'s means sung and rapped
{}'s means choir
{[]}'s means choir, rapped, and sung

Can't you hear the voices calling
Drug of my veins to stop the pain
Lost to the world unfolded
Hiding from the shadows
(Take my hand)
Letting go my last breath
(Don't let go)
I'm dying, save me

Take me away
(Take me away from here)
Take me away
(Hold on to me)
Running away from them
To no avail, I hold on to you
Before I fade tonight
(Don't give up)
Take me away....
From here.

Too lost to be spared
Final tear drips from the corner
[of my eye]
Ready to face my demise
No escape before I die
(Breathe, don't give up)
I'm lonigng for you
(Hold on my love)
The perfect plan has failed

Take me away
(Take me away from here)
Take me away
(Hold on to me)
Running away from them
To no avail, I hold on to you
Before I fade tonight
(Don't give up)
Take me away....
From here.

Is there something more
What is left to find
Take me away

(Hold your breath
Don't look back
There is no tommorow
Cry with me
Before we fade
Find yourself
Hold me
Don't let me go...
Take me away)

What have I become
What have I done
Where do I go beyond death
Close my eyes
I breathe deep
And I cry

[Take me away]

Take me away
(Take me away from here)
Take me away
(Take me away my love)
Running away from them
To no avail, I hold on to you
Before I fade tonight
(Don't give up)
Take me away....
From here.

Look into the light
(Take me away)
Follow it
(Take me away)
Lost to the world
(Take me away)
Just take my hand
(Take me away)
Come with me
(Take me away)
Take me away

From this, from pain, from here...

Cast into the dark
(Take me away)
Call to me
(Take me away)
Can't be found
(Take me away)
Hold on to me
(Take me away)
Come with me
(Take me away)
Take me away

Take me away
(Take me away from here)
Take me away
(Take me away my love)
Running away from them
To no avail, I hold on to you
Before I fade tonight
(Don't give up)
Take me away....
From here.

Take me away
Take me away
Take me away
(Never ending story
Drug of our veins
Lost in pain
Efforts in vain)
Can't find myself
Wanting you
Take away from here

Ooooooo
(Take me away)
Oooohh
(Take me away)
From this place
[Take me away]

(Hide the light)
Take me away
(Don't lie)
Take me away
(Shadows taking us)
Take me away
Take me away
Take me away

Take me away
(Take me away from here)
Take me away
(Take me away my love)
Running away from them
To no avail, I hold on to you
Before I fade tonight
(Don't give up)
Take me away....
From here.

Take me away, take me away...

Take me away
(Take me away from here)
Take me away
(Take me away my love)
Running away from them
To no avail, I hold on to you
Before I fade tonight
(Don't give up)
Take me away....
From here.

Lost forever
(stop)
Dying here
(stop)
Take
(Take)
Me
(Me)
[Away]

Come back to me
Lost without your love
Lost, lost, to the world
Dying at last
(Love me)
Heaven's gate opening
(Fade together)
I'm dying, save me...
Save me...
Save me...

Take me away
(Take me away from here)
Take me away
(Take me away my love)
Running away from them
To no avail, I hold on to you
Before I fade tonight
(Don't give up)
Take me away....

Take me away
Take me away
Living a lie
(False)
Take me away
Take me away
Lost to the world
(Fading)
Take me away
Take me away

{Take me away}
Lost to the world
{Take me away}
The end has come
{Take me away}
At last
We fade.
[Together]

Take me away....
Take me away....

Ooooo
Take me
Take me
Take me
Away
[Away]
-[{Away}]-........

From here.

This is a bit long for my normal verse by verse review 0_o

Um... It is fairly well written but it has a few cliches and is a bit to... er... It kinda seems to be profound forcefully.

Oh and it might help if you told us the chord progression and tempo of the song, because it already seems like it'll be about 7 minutes long (not long by my standerds...)