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May 26th, 2005, 8:25 PM
This is a story about a man named Kratos. It takes place in Ancient Greece. Here is the story of Kratos.But 1st I have to 1st warn you that this story has death, and slight gore

Chapter One: Part One: The Aegean Sea (The story gets alot better after this part)

Kratos:"The Gods of Olympus have abandoned me...................Now their is no hope."

Old Oracle:"And Kratos cast himself from the highest mountain in all of Greece. After 10 years of suffering, after 10 years of endless nightmares it would finally come to an end Death wuold be his escape from madness." *hear Kratos hit the rocky surface in the water* "But it had not always been this way, Kratos used to be a Champion of the Gods!"
*FLASHBACK to past of Kratos's life* *In the Aegean Sea*

*Loud thunderstorm*
Kratos:"Foul beasts I shall send you back to the depths of Hades!!!!!!"
Undead Legionnaires: *yelling out while charging to kill Kratos*
*As Kratos fights the legionnaires continue coming*
Kratos then begins to fight with his Legendary weapons, The Blades of Choas. Kratos tears them limb from limb. Then conuiously slices them in pieces with the Blades.
*Kratos makes quick work of the Undead, then travels to the bottom of the ship of which he is on, as he progesses onward at the lower part of the ship he encounters a new foe, a serpent like creature with enormous teeth dark green eyes and skin with a will to kill Kratos*
*Kratos then fights the beast, as Kratos hacks away at the beast it falls down temporarly knocked-out Kratos then stabs his chain blades in the beast and slams it's head against the wall of the ship, the beast awakens then tries to attack Kratos, Kratos dodges the raging bite of the beast only to stab at the beast yet again and slam it's head against the opposite side of the ship the beast tries to bite him yet again but Kratos stabs his blades on the cealing to dodge the attack, the beast misses and then tries to bite Kratos while he is on the cealing, Kratos dodges by jumping back down to the ground stabbing the beast to slam his head once more, then the creature is so hurt Kratos jumps upon it's head puts his two blades together then immediantly stabs the beast in the eye, the creature then rushes off after so much brutal pain, Kratos then presses onward to another boat in the Sea and finds a being that knows about the terrible deeds that which Kratos had done the person locks himself in a cage from fear of Kratos*
Man:I know who you are spartan, I know what you have done and I would rather die than be saved by you!"
*Kratos hears a noise on the deck of the ship and goes at the top and sees terrible flying harpies attacking and ripping people apart, Kratos then becomes angered and starts attacking the harpies*

People on the deck of the ship:"HELP!!!!!!!!!!!!!"

*As Kratos begins to slash and kill the harpies, the harpies suddenly leave so do all of the people, because something was coming it was a beast that looked aczatly like the one Kratos had just fought only it had two eyes unlike the one Kratos had defeated earlier, the beast immediantly snatched Kratos in it's mouth Kratos had to use all of his strength to try and use his very might to reopen the beast mouth before it eats him when he opened it back up he took out his blades and while still holding it's mouth open slashed the beast in the mouth and the creature immediantly went down then it rushed off from the fight with Kratos, Kratos had his blades stained with the blood of the beast.......*what will happen next, just wait till I write the next part it is going to get alot better than this believe me. Please give your opinion about this story so far. I hoped you enjoyed it thus far but it will get a hole lot better. I would continue the rest of part one but I'm having a problem right now I will write it soon though.

June 1st, 2005, 12:30 PM
Very interesting story. I am looking forward to reading more of your stories.

June 4th, 2005, 4:58 PM
it seems familiar, I like were its going, nice story.

June 4th, 2005, 5:00 PM
I will tell the next part soon. See ya.