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June 7th, 2005, 1:07 PM
My last post here on PC...but anyway...

It's like you're injected in my veins
I can't live without your love
I can try to break our bonds
But the pain won't fade
It grips me like a snake
It injects your poison into me
I can't put back together
The shards of your broken promise
So I try to escape the storm

I lie here, and I wish I could see you
I can't
So I sleep just see you in my dreams
But I awake without you
I cut just to bleed for you
The pain just won't fade
Neither will you

I can't tell anyone of my pain
I have to do it on my own
Oh the pain,
Where does it end?
Oh the pain,
I'm addicted to you
I'm addicted to the pain, to the love...
Because I'd die without you.

June 8th, 2005, 11:32 AM
Really, its sad that this will be your last post on PC, I always admired your poetry...

Very nice poem, as usual.... it could work either as a song or a poem, and does a really good job of doing both ^^.

Great job on each stanza... the words that you use.... and the way that you wrote it ^^