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June 24th, 2005, 2:48 PM
Ok, here's a really weird poem I made in about 3 minutes.

Please, somebody help me!
Am I in love?
Is this really love?
Gosh, this is a weird feeling.
Empty is my heart; no longer.

Lame...I know. There's a secret message in there somewhere. It's quite simple. If you figure it out don't tell the other people.

oni flygon
June 24th, 2005, 3:06 PM
It's easy to see that it's an acrostic...
Well, all I could say is to maybe work on the rythm a bit since it's free verse... that's just me.

June 24th, 2005, 3:08 PM
xD. Yeah, it is, but don't tell other people. I'll try to rhyme next time. I'm good at that.