View Full Version : what is life,love

July 16th, 2005, 11:43 AM
life is something that comes and goes
why bother being born when your just going to mold
day in,day out
it sometimes make me want to shout!

what is love
is love a dream from above
or is it a allusion
its just my conclusion

these are a couple of things I realy dont know

Cybex Mewtwo
July 17th, 2005, 5:03 AM
Although simple, this has a deeper message and meaning...I like this a lot. Great work and hope to see more from you.

July 17th, 2005, 2:57 PM
thanks,Ill be sure to make more.I also like your poems alot. ;)

Cybex Mewtwo
July 17th, 2005, 4:31 PM
Why thank you. Your words are touching. If you like them, I have more posted. You could view and check them out if you like.

July 17th, 2005, 5:13 PM
The poem is written very well! :)