Vacation..

Dedicated to the vacation I'll be going on VERY soon..

The day finally arrives, so now what do you do?
Well get to the airport! And fly Jetblue!
Its time to leave, so don't be late,
or it'll end up something you're sure to hate.

But either way, its no problem at all,
what you do from here, its your call.
Give em' the ticket and board the plane,
so there's no need to go insane.

A tropical island is my final destination,
so I can calm my endless frustration.
I like a martini, with a little lime,
though don't even drink it, barely any time.

A perfect trip it most definitely seems,
or am I just add the end of my dreams?
Then there's a wedding of sorts, god its such a bore,
But I'll enjoy myself, and sleep by the shore.

After some time the trip finally ends,
and I'm back here, seeing my friends.
I had a good time, it wasn't so bad,
I really don't have much to add...

So peace out and later,
Aww don't be a playa hater..


Well the bolded line was a typo...and after two weeks I really don't remember what was supposed to be there..

Not too bad at all, iverall I just think you tried a bit too hard with trying to rhyme your words... trust me the less let's say "effort", you try to make something the less effective the poem will be ^^

I did spot something that didn't really make sense when you said:

"A perfect trip it most definitely seems,
or am I just add the end of my dreams?" was that suppose to me at?

I really liked the ending though "don't be a playa hater" XD

This was prety good, but that last line made me laugh.
great work.