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    the mind runs at all times
    minsight to the blind
    my props people given me mine
    turn on te lights they are lime

    i tell them that is what i want then i kiss her
    i woke up feeling pain
    it is a shame

    people killeen shotten in an all day
    all wait bufee
    my girl dances in a sway

    i am cryin my granma dien
    i thought they was lieng
    life is like selling and buying

    people throw roses at my feet
    my fiends sayin that is week
    i tell them this is me
    why can't you see
    wehn i finnaly relize the curtain closes on me

    i take a bow
    my friends say wow
    you got talent
    now go out there you anbition

    i all most lost it
    then i bought it
    this bit is any thing for this

    i was braggin
    now i am saggin
    thinken that was me
    all those things i did when i was free

    the mind is like a lie
    and when you die
    you look back
    with no memories of your life that is that
    and you say that i whack

    well tell your family you love um
    go and hug um
    go and push their buttons somethin
    befor it is to late
    when the curtain closes in your face
     
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    It's pretty good.
    Only thing that needs correcting is some grammar and spelling apart from that it's pretty good.
     
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