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December 11th, 2005, 8:54 AM
I hope everyone enjoys this one!^^

Dreams Unwritten
Subtract the times that you weren't there
Subtract those times you didn't care
Add up the times you were my friend
I won't give up,It's not the end
I need you by me everyday,gave you my heart I fear to say
When every night I dream of you,I'm still unsure that you do too
So tell me when at night you dream that I'm the one you always see
Am I the one who holds you close,in your dreams do you love me most
Do you long to be with me,these dreams unwritten
Can't you see,am I the one who holds you close
Cause in my dreams I love you most

December 14th, 2005, 12:24 AM
That was pretty good, I was going to do somthing about dreams but decied not to when I saw the title of this one.

December 14th, 2005, 8:29 AM
So...beautiful. I love so much, I want to cry ;.; It flows perfectly. I haven't seen poetry this good in...ever. *hugs*

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