Original charater drawing

Okay I scanned a picture of a charater for a comic I am makeing and i am pretty sure it looks like a decent villan charater, what do you all think? I'll scan some more charaters later,but for now I'll just make a little test....

Her name is Kita : She's supposed to look friendly yet some what like she is hiding something...that's what I was aiming for...>_<

Hmm....very intresting....You should proably try drawing her with some devilsh look on her face. But the charateristics seems nice. With a diffrent expression, she looks somewhat like a villian. Nice details on the outfit, simple and basic. ^,^

I'm not much of a fan of that outfit, and I don't know if she's really got the villan look in her eyes. maybe try narrowing the eyebrows, just so that she still looks friendly, but you can tell she's hiding something. Good concept for a character though.

Thxs...^^ anyway, here are some more pictures.....I even made your request Kimi!! I see how much I can post this once, i drew a funny comic too.

This is the altered picture of her.

This is shiroyuki

This is Kimi

Hmm...those are a bit better....I like new year Kimi...so when are you gonna post the comic?

Cool I have I picture too But it is a latias I drew I you want you can check it out.(It is not that great)

I'll post the comic now...(I didn't want to double post...^^;;) PAY ATTENTION TO BACKGROUNDS!!! I've had many people not understand becuase of this...><




If you can't read what she is saying, then I'll type in what she is saying...

Lol...We've been lied to all our lives. A nice comic, but you still need to work on things, but hey the idea is what counts. (So that's what happens to my homework....)

These a nice, a tfew things you need to work on but not bad ^^

but one thing you have to change is the paper you draw on :/

NEVER use line paper to draw on the lines distract people from what you actually drew

I know but I only have lined paper at the moment....;_; I forgot my sketchbook at my original home, and I'm visiting my dad for the holidays.....;_; He has a scanner so that How I manage..

(Nice sig BTW)