If I

White_Winter_Wolf

Sasuke's Female Reincarnation!
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    It's more like a song then a poem, but I still think its bad.

    If I die, will you follow me?
    If I fall, will you catch me?
    If I cry, will you dry my tears?
    You?re my reflection in all mirrors.

    If I love, will you love back?
    If I?m tired, give me a piggyback?
    If I hurt, will you comfort my pain?
    You?re my reflection in the rain.

    I?ve learned, mirrors never show
    What you want to see
    You?re reflection is a puddle
    Doesn?t show who you want to be
    So I have decided
    Never to look in those again
    You?ll be my reflection
    Show my heart, not how I?m lookin

    If I jump, then you?ll jump with me
    If I sing, you?ll sing harmony
    If I ask, ?Are a cook or a dancer??
    ?I?m your reflection,? you?ll answer.
     
    I don't see why you say its bad. I liked it alot. You chose the right words to rym, and it all goes together.

    Keep it up. ;)
     
    Thank you!!! That's one of the nicest comments I've ever gotten for poetry. Even my English teacher said it was pretty bad. I got a C for this poem!
     
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