If I

[White_Winter_Wolf]

It's more like a song then a poem, but I still think its bad.

If I die, will you follow me?
If I fall, will you catch me?
If I cry, will you dry my tears?
You’re my reflection in all mirrors.

If I love, will you love back?
If I’m tired, give me a piggyback?
If I hurt, will you comfort my pain?
You’re my reflection in the rain.

I’ve learned, mirrors never show
What you want to see
You’re reflection is a puddle
Doesn’t show who you want to be
So I have decided
Never to look in those again
You’ll be my reflection
Show my heart, not how I’m lookin

If I jump, then you’ll jump with me
If I sing, you’ll sing harmony
If I ask, “Are a cook or a dancer?”
“I’m your reflection,” you’ll answer.

[Sumomo & Kotoko]

I don't see why you say its bad. I liked it alot. You chose the right words to rym, and it all goes together.

Keep it up. ;)

[White_Winter_Wolf]

Thank you!!! That's one of the nicest comments I've ever gotten for poetry. Even my English teacher said it was pretty bad. I got a C for this poem!