View Full Version : Betrayal

February 27th, 2006, 1:20 PM
~*For a lost friend*~♥
You'll seee me acting normal
Normal, heh, your such a twit
Maybe you can't see?
Or maybe you just don't get it?
Either way I can explain it all for you
You let me go and I said I was fine.
Little had I known....
The betrayal you had in mind.
Now, don't play dumb with me
Or screw around with my head.
In fact, I'de be much better
If you were probally dead.

You played me like a card
Then you lost the game
And threw that card away
Then I flew to the ground
And hit it hard.
I'm sorry I got attached,
And I'm sorry you weren't the one
I had felt like you stole my heart,
And shot it with a gun.
But, hey I'm fine now.

Seeing your pathetic face.
It's a fate worse then death
But see it doesn't hurt anymore.
I can't even feel the scar
You think it still hurts,
Like you running me over with a car?
You think it burns like fire?
Or do you think it stings?
Do you expect me to cry?
Well I'm not gonna do it.
I'm stronger than that crap.
Also take you "sorries" and screw it.

Cause I know when I'm beat
And I know what's wrong
I know that I'm supposed to cry
But I'm not gonna drag my feet.
You see the world doesn't revolve around you
Nor does it around me.
You like to play it smooth
an always keep your cool.
But I guess you couldn't handle it.
When you were called a fool?

Well I'm not gonna write anymore
Cause this topic makes me sick
So I'm gonna put down this pencil.
And walk right out the door
Oh and on more thing before I go
It's important so you better listen.
You think your suposed to.
Suposed to what? You say
Your suposed to think that I don't know
what the hell I'm talking about.
But I do so just leave,
This ship has left port.
So go before it gets personal
I always knew you were a dork.

February 27th, 2006, 3:06 PM
This is really good, I like the red writng

February 27th, 2006, 3:20 PM
Wow, that was really long, so I didn't read it, but it looked pretty and the parts I red were sad, I think.

Who did you get the cool heats though, I don't know how to be good at computers¬_¬

February 27th, 2006, 3:26 PM
Excuse me, that was pointless. Only post to review. And to review, you have to actually read the poem, okay?

February 28th, 2006, 11:48 AM
This is really good, I like the red writng
Thank you very much KeeperEUSC

One Charmed Dude
June 26th, 2006, 11:41 AM
nice job!! it was awesome!!!!!!

black panther
July 11th, 2006, 11:43 PM
wonderful, hides a meaning still is clear.