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Pikachu and Torchic
March 27th, 2004, 4:34 PM
I will post my poems here!
This is a poem about someone who got nightmares about their ,which really turned out to be their shadow when he walks into his bedroom.
Beyond the Shadows
Beyond the shadows of me,
I can't more than I can see,
a darkest shade of freeness,
like a horse in the wilderness,
black horses riding in shadows,
the brighter all goes away now,
it's the huge shadow beyond me,
I can feel it rage and growl,now,
now and then it doesn't go away,
like a dark spirit beyond the shadow,
was it me,the cause of this shadow?
was it me,the cause of this ?
was it me,the cause of the one fate?
I must keep quiet to see the reason!
whatever it is,sticks behind me,shhh!
whatever it was,sticks front of me,sh!
whatever it hid,sticks beyond me,shh!!
whatever it is,was,hid,was behind me!!
now I know the true suspect of this all,
a very simply scared thing,a black shadow!

March 27th, 2004, 4:47 PM
good good! more (awsbadguk)

Pikachu and Torchic
March 28th, 2004, 5:35 PM
I'm sad from Blizzard leaving,so here's one I thought up minutes ago...

In one long while when I met you,
I was your best bud and I said you,
you were my life,soul,and my heart!
but I cannot ever see the light again,
ever since you left me in the shadows,
couldn't think,couldn't live without you!
I still can sense inside me,signal inside,
a part of you is me,a part of me is you!
I cannot be solo.I couldn't think straight,
'cause the solution,is me & you together!

The other day I quited the baseball team,
and the day before I got a C on my test,
and my mother,she was so un-impressed,
'cause the 1 thing I want,being together!
my sadness is uncontrolable,can't stand it!
I wish you were with me right now as I talk,
I wish you were with me right after as I talk,
but the 1 and only friend of me is gone,yes.
but the 1 day after...I saw you once again...

March 30th, 2004, 7:14 AM
good good! more posts and i still have yet to write another poem hehe

May 14th, 2004, 3:48 PM
You have some talent going. Next time, why don't you try to use some rhyme? It might be a good challenge for you, considering neither of these poems rhyme. Just a suggestion...