View Full Version : Mewtwo's new life chapter 2:familer faces

March 23rd, 2006, 5:08 PM
the next day early in the morning Mewtwo was the first to wake up.He had the whole morning to himself so he took advantage of the others being asleep and went to go watch the humans wait for the bus at the base of the mountain to study them up close.Without geting discovered.

As Mewtwo watches the humans bunched up in a crowed chating,whispering,and goseping to one another he said to himself "I wonder what it like to belong to be cared for".continualy watching them he veered his head to the right and finds a young lady standing alone out of the crowed."why is this human not talking to the others"?He questioned.

Concirned he flies down the Mountain stoped to quikly tranform into a human with a traveling bag so no one would get sucpiciuose.After siuted up he looks around in search for the strang young lady and finds her on the other side of the crowed.Slowely he walks by the bunched up humans and freezed about a foot away from the girl.To nervuse to take another step he took a deep breath and slowley exhaled.

He took a couple more steps until he was an inch away and said"uh hey".

The girl whirled around startled."oh you startled me uh hi"she looked about seventeen or older.She had short black hair purple eyes and was wearing a black and blue uniform.

"sorry I didn't mean to creep up on you like that".Mewtwo's face covered with embarecment.

"thats ok I know you didn't mean it".she reached out her hands."My name is Kazuki whats yours"?

Mewtwo paused for a moment and stared at Kazuki's extended hand."my name"?He said in panic.

To be continued...

March 24th, 2006, 12:41 PM
Did you even try to revise this, or did you type this up in the reply box? Numerous grammatical errors make it hard for me to follow the [rather fast] plot correctly. Please, please, please edit your story/type it in a word program before posting it, and at least make it stretch out longer. You introuce events too quickly. =/