Dsaerno
April 22nd, 2006, 5:29 PM
This is a poem I wrote for a girl I knew. It's 100% true. Other than the fact that I wrote "hell" once, it's fine for a 4-year-old to read.
EDIT: I just realized that there's a poems sub-forum. Whoops!
-Saving Me-
You were, I was,
Life had begun.
The history we had
Was little to none.
But we were together.
In a sea of faces.
And to get to you
I’d walk just a few paces.
But then fate came and struck,
You got farther away.
Here, I was stuck.
And there you would stay.
Time passes on,
And you were forgotten.
I became foul,
Twisted and rotten.
I did some bad things,
I hated myself.
It wasn’t your fault,
But I was in hell.
I cried every night,
And pained every day.
I wanted a way out,
So I’d sit and pray.
And in my confusion,
As plain as day,
I saw your face.
Was this the way?
After that, at nighttime, instead of crying,
I’d think of you.
And during the day, instead of sinning,
I’d think of you.
And sure as it happened,
I started turning around.
Today, I am different,
Pure and sound.
But incomplete.
I no longer do evil.
I help those I see.
But I fell in love
With you saving me.
You gave me purpose,
The purpose was love.
You gave me strength,
The strength to hold on.
Every night’s a little better.
Every day’s a little brighter.
Though I still hold my scars,
Like a war-torn fighter.
But I am still stuck here.
And you are drifting farther away.
We’ve got one last lifeline,
I hope it won’t stray.
During this whole ordeal,
You were blissfully unaware.
Meanwhile I burned inside,
But not from before,
Because of our position.
If you never know about it,
How can we be?
And what will I do
If you reject me?
Born under the same sky.
We learned as children under the same roof.
And then it all happened.
I did some bad things.
But when all came to worse,
You unknowingly saved me.
And now I love you.
But do you love me?
EDIT: I just realized that there's a poems sub-forum. Whoops!
-Saving Me-
You were, I was,
Life had begun.
The history we had
Was little to none.
But we were together.
In a sea of faces.
And to get to you
I’d walk just a few paces.
But then fate came and struck,
You got farther away.
Here, I was stuck.
And there you would stay.
Time passes on,
And you were forgotten.
I became foul,
Twisted and rotten.
I did some bad things,
I hated myself.
It wasn’t your fault,
But I was in hell.
I cried every night,
And pained every day.
I wanted a way out,
So I’d sit and pray.
And in my confusion,
As plain as day,
I saw your face.
Was this the way?
After that, at nighttime, instead of crying,
I’d think of you.
And during the day, instead of sinning,
I’d think of you.
And sure as it happened,
I started turning around.
Today, I am different,
Pure and sound.
But incomplete.
I no longer do evil.
I help those I see.
But I fell in love
With you saving me.
You gave me purpose,
The purpose was love.
You gave me strength,
The strength to hold on.
Every night’s a little better.
Every day’s a little brighter.
Though I still hold my scars,
Like a war-torn fighter.
But I am still stuck here.
And you are drifting farther away.
We’ve got one last lifeline,
I hope it won’t stray.
During this whole ordeal,
You were blissfully unaware.
Meanwhile I burned inside,
But not from before,
Because of our position.
If you never know about it,
How can we be?
And what will I do
If you reject me?
Born under the same sky.
We learned as children under the same roof.
And then it all happened.
I did some bad things.
But when all came to worse,
You unknowingly saved me.
And now I love you.
But do you love me?