Forever, my love

fallen_angel

Sabaku No Gaara
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    Hey this is my latest poem. Help me correct anything wrong please. This is for of course phantom_of_death. ^_^

    Forever, my love

    My love for you will reach to the sky,
    it will stretch towards the planets,
    singing for you and I.

    For it knows no end, my love,
    surpasses the obstacles you may not know,
    if can go from here to over there.

    Don't you know how I feel?
    No matter if you don't feel the same,
    as I do, for it does not matter.

    My love, how I want to wish you well,
    with your troubles and your fears,
    my heart aches with worry for you, my dear.

    To me you're a silver treasure,
    which surpasses any trinkets of gold.
    Or sapphires or rubies.

    So remember this well, my love,
    will never cease or die,
    it will always just grow every passing day.
     
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    tee hee! i know this poem....
    when you gave me the first copy, i sent it to microsoft word....and only a few spelling errors i saw, but i guess you corrected them right?

    thanks anyways!
     
    Yep, of course you do

    Hehe no problem. XD
     
    Aww, that's so sweet! Hey, it's me . . . Girl who goes to school with u, has short black hair, your BBF, and name starts with J! If u guessed Jessica than your correct!! *Hugs fallen_angel*
     
    Hey Jessica! Its great your back on pc! Thanks for posting.
     
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