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Bohemian Rhapsody
December 21st, 2006, 10:14 PM
((Yeh....I will use this thread to post up my poetry and such....^_^....))

Christmas bells are ringing,
Everyone's singing.
The smell of love is in the air,
A pretty girl, bright blue eyes with a flair.
Blonde hair down to the waist,
Her presence makes my heart race.
Chestnuts roast on an open fire in my heart,
Seeing her, my lips fall apart.
No words are formed, only gibberish.
She loves me, or so she says.
Maybe it's only a wish.
Only three more days,
until she makes her presence known.
Our lips touch, she blushes,
I am not down.
We talk, she shushes,
I quiet myself.
The only words she says,
"I Love You".

melod.ii ous demyx~♪
January 2nd, 2007, 10:06 PM
Bohemian Rhapsody~

That poem was really gorgeous.
nice word choice, and beautiful description.
It sounds really emotional.
Keep on writing, you've got talent! :)

January 21st, 2007, 1:43 PM
Good job! I like your straightforward writing and descriptions. It's really cute, too! ^w^

January 21st, 2007, 1:52 PM
Wow gets me joyfull Like christmes is coming. Nice poem man!