Okay, so since your fic is a bit long I don't think I can do it in 1 shot. But I have no intentions of not looking it over and like Obsidian, I'm going to give you a full story review. You can let me know how you want me to send it to you, but it's about high time I give what you asked so yeah.....I should have it done by next week (hopefully but that's what I'm aiming for)