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  1. Devil's Guitarist
    July 20th, 2010 6:53 AM
    Devil's Guitarist
    yeah well, I think they deserved it. They didnt play that bad :P hows life man?
  2. Devil's Guitarist
    June 22nd, 2010 6:29 PM
    Devil's Guitarist
    yeah xD now we play agaisnt Mexico... PIECE OF CAKE DUDE!!! those mexican guys will have to help each other taking the boots out :P
  3. Devil's Guitarist
    June 22nd, 2010 12:33 PM
    Devil's Guitarist
    yeah kinda, we are already in but you know... I like it =D
  4. Devil's Guitarist
    June 16th, 2010 1:44 PM
    Devil's Guitarist
    yeah totally, everybody is gone, ronaldinho, ronaldo (the fatty xD), roberto carlos, cafu, brasil isnt the same
  5. Devil's Guitarist
    June 15th, 2010 4:06 PM
    Devil's Guitarist
    dude, brasil sucks, it gets too confident and thats why korea scored :P portugal isnt that bad, but seriously? agaisnt argentina? every knows we got a kickass team, and maradona isnt that bad after all.
  6. Devil's Guitarist
    June 14th, 2010 6:17 PM
    Devil's Guitarist
    ohhhhhhhhhhh cool! Im from Argentina, who are you rooting for? xD
  7. Devil's Guitarist
    June 14th, 2010 12:03 PM
    Devil's Guitarist
    yeah, 1-0, Im surprise by the japanese xD where are you from btw?
  8. Devil's Guitarist
    June 13th, 2010 7:08 PM
    Devil's Guitarist
    hey man, whats up?
  9. JX Valentine
    June 11th, 2010 9:21 PM
    JX Valentine
    Tip about this, but don't post rough drafts. What you want to present to a reader is a representation of your skill at its best, not something you know is crap or needs improvement. (It says to a reviewer that you're not putting much effort into the fic. Whether or not this is true is another story, but either way, it causes them to think they might not want to leave a review because it wouldn't matter whether or not you get them. As in, if you don't show a reviewer that you're putting all your effort into making this as good as you can get it, the reviewers don't see a point in telling you what's wrong with it because they think you're not working on it anyway.) If you need someone to bounce ideas off of or to go over your work, that's what beta readers are for.

    Also, you'll really want to avoid saying "I'm not taking action until I get more replies." That doesn't look attractive to the kinds of reviewers you probably want to get because experienced reviewers will look at that and think you're not worth their time. After all, it's like saying you may or may not listen to what they have to say until after you get more people to comment, and on top of that, it says to them that you're begging for reviews.

    Not to be overly harsh or anything, but these sorts of things just don't look good to reviewers.

    On that note, I'll take a closer look at your story when I've got a chance. I just didn't want to derail the topic with all this.
  10. MagitekElite
    June 8th, 2010 4:28 PM
    Oh, okay lol

    Well, in a day or so, I will start to write chapter two ^.^
  11. MagitekElite
    June 7th, 2010 9:16 PM

    You mean my story, or yours? :)
  12. Numbers
    June 7th, 2010 11:48 AM
    Hey there, you said you were going to write a book on that unown idea you had, why don't you write a story for the fan-fic forum on this site? That'd be pretty cool, I'd read it and comment it.

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