Recent content by _Mattypoo_

Thanks for the feedback! I see exactly what you mean when you talk about breaking the rhythm. Like I said to Vragon, I just wasn't sure what to put in its place, so I left it in. And when it comes to putting in sentences just for rhymes, I may or may not be guilty...... There were lines like...

Thanks a lot for the reply! I always love getting feedback, especially when it comes to things I'm new with. I see what you mean. When I was writing this poem, I knew what I wanted, but it didn't come out quite right. I'll probably try another poem on this topic in the near future. I know...

I haven't posted here in ages, after I wrote myself into a corner with my last story. I tried my hand I poetry for the first time last week, and I thought I'd share it here. I was tasked with writing a "conquering fear" poem, a tribute poem, and a memory poem. Feel free to tell me what you...

In the one I'm currently writing, I'm using a handful of characters, the Pokemon, and the two regions from G/S/C.

Hey all! Not gonna lie, I completely forgot about this story. Chapter 7 – Interrogation I can’t see anything. Why can’t I see anything? Did I go blind? Am I dead? Oh my Arceus, am I dead? No, that can’t be. I can feel my hands tied behind me. Why are my hands tied behind me? And what is that...

A good way I get going is I listen to music before I write. I read an article (I can't remember the website) that said it has been proved scientifically that listening to music about fifteen minutes before you work actually helps you be more productive. The reasoning behind this is listening to...

For the story I'm currently writing, I plan on incorporating a person (bad guy, obviously) who is mentally insane. I would even say borderline psychopath. I really think this would make the story feel complete, but I have absolutely no clue how to do it. I don't want to spoiler the story too...

Holy cow, I just stumbled upon this, and I think I'm in love. Seriously though, I think I might try something like this on my own! These are really funny!

You forgot about this story, didn't you? Well if you want to know why I haven't posted in four months, its all right below this. Chapter 6 – Searching Lyra sat in bed, still waiting for Liam to return. It’s ok, she thought, he’ll be back any minute now. After thirty minutes of him being gone...

Aww, what a happy ending! I really did enjoy this stor- Whoahoho! Didn't they just start "dating" like two days ago? Dang, Green. You were scared of her about that same time ago.

Keep in mind, I am writing this review to YOU and you only. I have not read PrincessStella's version, so I am reviewing only on your account of the story. I don't know what ideas you created or the ones she did. This story caught my eye, and I'm let's just say I'm glad it did. I really enjoyed...

I have an idea for the main character who has autism. You said she is less childish, but she still is, right? Well, since she has some social problems, people might not understand her as much and it would always make her cry. Basically, a crybaby. The autism could also cause her to have trouble...

I was listening to the "Trainer Red Epic Remix" by djthefishhead on YouTube, and I was scrolling through the comments. I saw somebody wrote something about Red's story. As I was reading it, I noticed it seemed very...Familiar. Sure enough, when I read the last line, I knew it was me who wrote...

Me: "Oh hey, a fic about Serena! I hope I'm in for a trea-" Me: O.o

Chapter 5 – Fears Confirmed Morning came, and Gold, Toque, and Grant returned to the hospital. Liam checked out around ten o’clock, and he was given crutches to take with him. “I don’t need them,” he told them, “I can walk just fine.” The truth was, he couldn’t. The doctors insisted he took...