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“So, we just head north a little longer and…whapow! Jubilife City!” Jaime spread his hands out to indicate the panorama view Jubilife City would provide. Miles blinked, unconvinced. “Personally, I’m more concerned with training my pokemon. Piplup and I will never be strong enough to take...

Yet anothe update...I hope I'm doing okay grammar-wise. I've been trying to take in all of the suggestions, but I'm not sure I've got everything just right yet. There was a long silence. “Well?” Ember asked at last, looking into the huge eyes of the baby vulpix. “Well.” Jaime...

Intriguing. This is completely captivating...I'll be waiting for more.

With a few of the suggested gramatical improvements, this will be a great read. The begginning really sucked me in...I can't wait for more!

Chapter Three “This is so exciting!” Peridot squealed, skipping a little down the path. She’d left Hearthome earlier that week, and was well on her way to Sandgem. Beside her, an azurill bounced merrily. The sights of the big, bright world were amazing to both, who had never left their...

Thanks so much, Dagzar. I love to write, but I've been out of practice lately, and so it's nice to see where I can make improvments. I did forget to preview - oops! I'll be sure not to make that mistake again. Chapter Two Miles shook his head as he slowly emerged from his bed. He’d never...

Very intriguing...this is a great start, and I can't wait to see more. I think you could imporve it a little with some more description, but other than thatm it's lovely.

I'm all dressed for bed -green tanktop, workout shorts, and a gigantour zip-up hoodie I stole from my boyfriend.

Opulent Prospects - The story of four trainers from all walks of life, gathered together for one mission. It will go along the Pearl storyline, with a few variations. Feel free to be critical - I'm always looking for ways to improve. :) Chapter One The city of Canalave was...