Recent content by Cs32

Because people will get bored with it, like people who read this and don't reply. Trust me, one of the things of being one of the reviewers of SPPF for a long time with a know account makes you know stuff. Like what people want with fics and what they don't want. I learned that after a while...

Chapter Five Thanks..you think it's long? Tch that is one of my worst chapters I say. You will see what I mean soon. :D ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Chapter Five: Distraction As Matt left the forest behind and walked on with Inferno, he saw a good size shop with trees...

Chapter four Ok, thanks. I will change #1 and 2 in the future. It isn't like R/S as you will soon find out with the next two chapters. Though thanks for the review cause now I can post. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Chapter Four: Petalburg woods We now find Matt deep...

It's my turn to critasize now. :p You just need to stop having Team Rocket coming in every chap, and try to put more into each chapter to get it more lengthy. Here are some mistakes I found. I think they were in the last chapter you did. It tried to withstand, but Charmander was the...

Name: Matthew Licharchi (not my real last name) Age: 13 Nickname: Matt Pokemon: Treeko Personality: Very friendly and funny, he is very athletic and loves to run. Appearance: Has short brown hair, brown eyes, and is 5' 3". He always wears shorts and a T-shirt or tanktop since he runs...

Yes, I just pmed you back about it. Just posted about it here because I felt like it. XD ~~CS~~

Chapter Three Chapter three: Norman, the gymleader "I thought that May said that the first gym badge I could get was in Rustburto, but I guess not," Matt said to a fully healed Inferno. ("Well then she was wrong, so lets go challenge the gymleader!") Inferno said anxiously. "No, not yet we...

Much better then the first few, I can deffinatly see the difference. So your saying you started being serious with this chapter? Well, if you keep on working with it, you will get better and better. You actually have reviews something my fic here doesn't have. Though it's interesting on...

Chapter two Chapter Two: The mysterious daughter of Birch After training with Torchic for about four hours in the tall green grass, Matt had finally made it to Oldale Town and decided to heal his new pal at the Pokemon Center. As Matt and Torchic looked, they saw a great big building with...

Ok, i've decided to post my fic from serebii here, please tell me what you think! Remember, this is only the first chapter I wrote and isn't good with the length side. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Chapter One: The beginning "Wake up son or else you're not going to get your...

Interesting little part with the proffessors, good to think that more battling is on the way! Later ~~CS~~

This was pretty much how my first chap to my fic was before I got help and fixed it up. It should be like this: "Poochyena, use your Tackle attack!" Max commanded. "Cubone! Bone Club!" Sam commanded "Charmander! Scratch!" Charlie commanded. You should also use more words like explained...

Good, I liked it. Thats just like Ash I started to think, to eager at hearing another city and realizes he actually needs to go the other way. Till your next chapter, Later. ~~CS~~

Thats a pretty cool pokemon Peekimon, and its evolution. Your tweaking of the screens was much better to, now I really can't wait for the game. ~~CS~~

Hey Umbra, I could probably help you with that, though Chibi says she has it.... I've been woundering whats going to happen ever since you first posted this at SPPF. I like all fics that have some made up pokemon in them, but yet I don't have any in mine. Later ~~CS~~