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8 :D good times, good times. How old were you when you first snuck out?

Who's the other Gym Leader? What's going on? What happened to her? Agggh don't do this to me! I'm excited for the next one! I saw one mistake but I'll have to point it out later. Since I'm on my phone. Anyways please continue as soon as possible!

I always mix up Professor. Gah! Anyways thanks for the pointers, i'll definitly take them into mind.

Chapter 2: Birthday Wish Seth strapped the belt around his waist, and strung the backpack over his shoulders before continueing down the path. As he walked, Professor Oak's building slowly came into view. The main part of the lab had a rectangular shape. A windmill was connected to the...

I like the story a lot so far, except for one thing. Why did Mr.Pokemon let her sleep in his back yard Lol. Anyways, I can't wait for the next chapter.

Thank you so much. That's gonna help a lot. I'll revise the second chapter and fix the same mistakes. Thanks for the review.

Chapter 1 :Farewell for now. Seth woke up with a yawn and jumped out of bed in joy. He was finally ten years old able to get his very first Pokemon from Professor.Oak and begin his journey. Something he had been waiting sixe years for. Choices of Pokemon ran through his head. He spaced out...

This sounds good. I;d like to join. But my Su will have to be up some time this week. If thats alright.

Ok that'd be great. Thanks.

Are there any starters left?

Okay, i'll have to post it tommorow though. My moms coming home today after a week long vacation in Las Vegas.

Name: Jesse Kanolye Age:13 Appearance:. Jesse is very skinny and has some muscle in his upper arms, two traits he herited from his moms side of the family. His hair is short, brown and always messy. Stnding out n all directions. Its a hassle to keep flat. His dark green eyes and smile our said...

Okay I see what you mean now. Ill fix it up right this time. Thank you .

Yeah I have trouble with grammar. Thanks,Ill try and fix it up now. Ok I went through it and fixed the mistakes I could find. Is it any better? Or did i just make it worse.

Name:Jesse Kanolye Age:15 Apearance:. He is very skinny and has some muscle, which he takes after from his mom. His hair is short, brown and always messy. It stands out all over the place. His dark green eyes and smile our his best facial features. He skin is very tanned ski. On his neck are two...