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Part 2: Suddenly Downhill Etoire sighed glumly. Today was his birthday, yet he was rather depressed as of late. Magikarp had started to act odd lately, losing his cheerful disposition and alternating between being lethargic and suddenly furious, venting it's anger by swimming around. He...

Note: This is a story I'm working on for a character I'm playing; I'm not much of a writer, so feel free togive lots of constructive criticism. Here's some shameless advertising for the roleplay: http://goldenrodhs.proboards.com/index.cgi Hope that's allowed, it's not exactly unrelated...

Whoa, it's been a while since I've been back to the story, sorry. It's really great, I liked it, as always! Also, understandable why you wouldn't want to put someone's words in your story, I get it =D Thanks for the support, but whenever I try to write a story it never goes well. I've written...

Haha, thanks! I found it interesting how Green didn't really feel guilt from Red's questioning, perhaps you can include some of that in future chapters? Such as some introspection on what she'd done, almost ruining Barclay's chance, etc. Then Barclay finding out but forgiving her, sort of thing...

It took me a day or so to read through it all, but your writing? Fantastic. Sucked me right in. Felt a little sad when I reached the end, and am on my toes waiting for the next set of updates.

I like it! It was incredibly creepy reading it and hearing that "blue giggled", though, at first. Since I'm used to the names being the other way around... well... imagine Gary giggling. I liked the interaction between the characters and the resemblance to the manga, but the battle scenes could...

It's interesting seeing everyone's writing style in a role play. some people write gigantic posts, others have lackluster ones that may or may not improve over time. I patiently await your next chapter (Don't rush, the wait makes it all that much better, haha.)

Oh, no, I'm not a good writer. Occasionally I dabble in some role playing, story writing of sorts, but I'm not good enough to write my own stories. I just catch onto some small things that could be changed, nothing to be thankful for. Thank you, though! I enjoyed the battle scene, the detail...

The second chapter was really good too! Though there were some minor typo's if you don't mind my fixing them and pointing out some changes you can make yourself? Charmander is technically owned by Red, so "its trainer" should be possessive, I.E. It's. You probably knew that, but since the post...

Haha, sorry. Guess that it's doing it's job right, then! The point of the creepypasta story is to spook you, so, I guess it fulfilled its role. I find it interesting how everyone that's replied has read or heard about creepy black, it is rather memorable, isn't it? There's a fanfiction similar...

Ahhh, I did so like Bayleaf and Quilava. Yeah, the second generation was pretty badass. Heracross! =D Thank you! Spaaaaaace!

Perhaps each new region is really an alternate universe in which a new "ash" and "pikachu" have their own adventure. Haha, well, that seems unlikely... In any case, I do find it sad how Pikachu turns back to level 5 at every new region. I understand that if Ash remained a super pro and his...

I think that Pikachu being the starter is great, it lead to some really interesting developments in movies and now pikachu is sort of a mascot for the entire series. If Ash had gotten a different pokemon in the beginning, I think it would have been interesting if he'd gotten a magikarp. Seeing...

I really loved some of his pokemon from the original seasons, but I doubt they'll be bringing back many of them. Perhaps Oak uses them and they're all happy... Did Charizard return from the valley? I haven't seen any new episodes, so I wouldn't know... Well, at least charizard got a semi...

Bloody heck, I think he's got short term memory loss that's subjected to physical memory reminders. The reason why he remembers all those legendaries is because he either gets whupped hard by them or they do something cool. He doesn't recall saving the world so many times from doom in the...