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the legendary poems: im writing legendary poems. uh-oh uh-oh. im writing legendary poems. because my poes are legendary. they describe my life. as a rastafari. waka waka - this time for africa. soheeeeeeeeeeeeeeelllllllllllllaaaaaaaaaaaaa. draw forth your sword, evil darth vader. i challenge...

your big brother: your big brother is tired of you. youre always in the way. be ashamed. realize youre nothing. i want you to travel to another dimension. because you are too disgusting for this one. that is for sure. beast.

my eyes are your soul: im sitting here ating these chips. theyre way better than before. back when i was soul. back when i hadnt realised this. now im soft like a monkey. oh pocahontas. ride me. like a donkey. i can also do a french song.

play with me: i just need someone to play with me. for without me. they wouldnt have a dear friend less. auremour. he crawls like a spider and eats the snakes. mmhh. big tasty snakes. take this army. and join me in battle. as we ride for valhalla. in your dreams. hahahaha. i roll with jesus...

I really didn't see any death threats?

What if I rewrite the current story, just in a less mature way? And the thread was not heading in any negative direction, one single member was. Ban him instead of closing the whole thread, punishing me for him acting weird is not fair, man.

Thanks for ruining all of my hard work, but what's the point in being able to rate it 18+ (which I did), if the story can't have mature content?

Where did you get the idea that I'm 13? I'm not :) Oh, and even though we don't agree, I accept your opinion. Oak is not a clear hero per see, but he is definetely better than Ash. And now, when Oak is Muslim and Ash is Jewish, and their upcoming battle will decide whatever or not Pallet will...

Chapter 8: Pikachu's Voice "May Allah have mercy on your soul, 'cus I certainly won't" Oak's voice said. These were the words that Ash heard in his nightmare, before he woke up in shock. He had fallen asleep on the sofa again, although it was early in the evening. The TV was still running, and...

Oh no, don't tell me this is one of the sites who doesn't tolerate anything else about Islam than worshipping? It's a story, and Islam is not discriminated against, it will play a big role in Oak's life, just like how Judaism will in Ash's.

It happened for the first time in 1982. And then, it repeated itself in 2006. And now, as predicted by experts, it already begins yet again... In 2010. And a few hours ago, the first action went on. Yes, people... It's time for: The Third Lebanon War. The third war to be fought between Lebanon...

Ash threated Oak like a criminal, not the old man who used to help him so much who now made one simple mistake. Ash's actions can not be justified. Ash was innocent in the accident in his house, though; Oak hallucinated, as stated in the story's news papers part. However; Ash told all of Pallet...

I took all of your critics too heart, and I hope this chapter showed that :) Now, Oak's symbolism of Palestine will be more clear, and I wanna show more details from now on. Ash will also convert to Judaism soon, to make him more Israeli. More stuff will happen to make the metaphor more clear.

Chapter 7: Jihad The church was big; almost too big. Oak, who had gone against Arceus' orders, was now is Arceus' house, about to murder a servant of Arceus. What he was doing was dangerous; he was confronting the whole power of Arceus at once, at the base of Arceus' power. He had to act...

I'll try to improve my writing, and I'll continue the story after this post, hopefully better than ever. Now, for some explanations... Oak gets his drugs from the Saffron City slums, as explained in chapter 6, and he smuggles them via a little pocket he made in his leg, which he can open with a...