Recent content by GardevoirGuy

Once again, I am loving this feedback. I'll have to rework on the dialogue on parts 2 and 3 before i repost them. I'll definitely take into consideration the emotions you wrote about.

I thought I'd go ahead and post part 3 so you can get a feel for the battles and how they go down :P. The Year of the Monotypes – Part 3 I walk into the stadium. Looks like we’re going to be battling in a typical flat stadium for this match. Nice. I see Felix walk out opposite from me. Felix...

The Year of the Monotypes – Part 2 I wait in the big arena with the other 131 trainers. I haven’t seen Sam or Hans yet but something catches my eye. As the host, Elvitz Pretzels begins to speak, I look up on the big screen. The words “the year of monotypes” is what it says on the screen. This...

Thanks once again. I really like your feedback. The battling doesn't begin until part 3 of the story, however, in part 2 dialogue and quotes are introduced. I'm not sure if the way I am doing it will make sense to others but since your feedback makes me feel like I'm learning something, I will...

Got it, thanks man. So whats the process for posting the second part? do i just do it here like a generic reply? Or start a new thread. I guess it's a silly question but I'm new to this.. Edit: I posted this before reading your feedback, Slayr231. Thanks for reading and yes, if you can take...

So it would be enough to call it an introduction? This is kinda an overnight thing that I thought of. I'll still post part 2 so you can get a better idea. Thanks for replying though.

I'll release part 2 if people think this is a decent start.

The Year of the Monotypes - Part 1 This is a very prestigious moment in my journey. The Pokémon League, where trainers all across the world meet here in Unova to compete to achieve their goal. Whether it is Pokémon Champion or an opportunity to dethrone a member of the elite 4, only the best...

Hi guys. So I have a fanfic series that I want feedback on. if you are interested in reading the first part, let me know.