Recent content by [Imaginative]:[Clockwork]

I get what you're saying here and now that I look at it, you're right. The intro about studying was originally because I wanted this to start out with a more dull, high-school-ish intro before kind of letting the reader realize that this kid murdered his teacher to make a huge contrast. But...

I'm always worried about description with first-person so it's great to hear that it had just enough. :) I've never read it. ._.;;;; /loser Haha, but yes, this character is quite a douchebag. It was great fun to write. XD Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it.

Here's a little bite-sized one-shot I wrote recently. I feel like it's something different for me, since the narration is unlike anything I can remember writing. But I had fun with it, so hopefully you'll have fun reading it. :) I didn't know this, but Dervish is Earl's last name. So the Mr...

Yeah, I really wanted to make it more of an "every trainer" deal, so I didn't add too many specific details. Haha that was the main reason I lost points so I guess I'll take this opportunity to explain myself. I was basically thinking that once the trainer started to get more famous and was...

I wasn't sure if I was going to post this, but I figured I might as well. It won 8th place, so that's not too bad, right? I've edited it a little based on the judges' critique. It's an easy read, just under 2 pages, I think, since I wrote it in two hours go for quality, not quantity. Anyway...

8th place! Whoo! That's perfectly fine with me. ;D Thanks to the judges for taking the time to score and comment. I can see why you didn't think it fit particularly well with the prompt since, reading it over, I can see that I kind of strayed from the original, prompt-y idea I had. Oh well...

Ehhh, I got the idea just hours before the competition ended so I didn't get as much time as I would have liked. Also, it seems very similar to something I've done before (and if I'm being honest, it's kind of a lesser version). However, I still like it and think it's decent. It was fun to...

A Formal List of Complaints (to be posted anywhere on the Dairy Queen premises) Contains swearing To the boss 1. Listen, I realize you're like three feet tall, but could you stop staring at my torso every time we speak? It only makes the awkward silences you inevitably bring about that much...

Suuuper last minute but I got mine sent. It's really short so hopefully you're not too upset to get this one entry in right before the deadline. XD I actually wasn't planning on entering but I was suddenly struck with an idea about three hours ago and got to work (and also made an account here...