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Kelly smiled as she carefully placed the last touches to the letter she was composing. She lay on the ground in the shade of one of the gnarled and wide everlasting oaks that surrounded Shiloh. The Jolteon used a thin stream of electricity from one of the extended claws in her forepaw to burn a...

Chapter Sixteen: Abeyance “I can already hear their anguished cries, even as I try to shut out the voices while I writhe in my nightmares. I am in a paradise, yet my kindred are still trapped in Erebus and my brother is lost. But, I still have to complete my mission for the world. I am...

Chapter Fifteen: Blind “One of my counterparts will experience a similar problem. Like myself, she will not be able to find a hero. But instead of salvaging a human falling through the space in between dimensions, she will fashion her own hero out of the dimensions themselves. Her hero will...

I try my best to read what I can. I will occasionally browse the fan fiction forums and see if there is anything new and interesting to read. I can gladly say that as of recently, I've put more effort into reading more stories (though unfortunately, leaving reviews of those stories has screeched...

[Warning: This chapter does reach the PG-15 area for more than one scene. Please be advised.] Chapter Fourteen: Exposure "There are three ways that the Civil War can end: Restoration, Independence, or Revolution. None of which result in the continuation of the monarchy. " --Historian...

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Chapter Thirteen: Interception “We wished to create a weapon to end the conflict before it started, a weapon more powerful than anything we could have dreamed of ... And by Arceus’s jewel, did we succeed. The results were more horrifying than I could ever imagine. Despite their best...

You probably have, because that's where I'm most active. Well, I do tend to be pretty descriptive, I do admit. Sometimes it does get in the way of telling the story, so I do see what you're getting at. Unfortunately, at the current time, it's not too high on my priority list to go back and...

Warning: Some parts of this chapter reach the PG-14/5 rating and might be a little disturbing for some readers. It is only for a scene, but still, be warned. Chapter Twelve: Ethics “She will be the greatest scientific development the world has ever seen. Efficient, incorruptible...

Chapter Eleven: Intercession "As the violence spread, the villages and settlements scattered along the Borderlands were the first to fall to the Colonists' rage. The backwater towns of Treasure Town, Coldledge Village, Fern City, and Pokemon Square were among the final refuges to be...

Chapter Ten: Memory ” Did you know that the average Grass Type needs approximately seven to nine hours of sunlight per day to maintain healthy cognitive functionality? I found that fact interesting. Tell me, how long have you been trapped here? Weeks? Months? Regardless, your head must be...

Like the Cutlerine and Phantom said before me: the chapter needs to be what's comfortable for you to accomplish. Whatever it takes for you to feel like you moved the plot and/or character development far enough. Length doesn't have much to do with anything. As long as you can check off the two...

Knightfall's note: To anyone who reads this, the prologue in the very first post of the story has been heavily edited. It is pretty important to reread it if you haven't already. Chapter Nine: Perspective ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Executive Order 47: “In the event any...

I know the odds aren't looking good, but is there a chance that Jasmine can scare the coral off of Elm like she did when she entered the helicopter? It's a long shot, but it's worth a go. Knightfall signing off...

Chapter Eight: Extradition ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ “You may ask why I make everything so tedious and drawn out when a direct route is far faster? Simplicity is for the simple-minded and those inclined to be moronic. You brought me under your employment, so you will be content with the way I...