Recent content by Maced

I think that's the surge writers tend to get when they really want to write a particular scenario that's been stuck in their heads...or fresh in their minds. That's the "Writer's Adrenaline" I get. One day I might be doing something, and suddenly get this urge to write a scene. I find it to be a...

Whoops! Those mistakes were embarrassing. Thanks, Slayr213, you helped a ton. I will admit I did rush this without giving it much thought, and that's because I didn't know what to improve on. Somers automatically believed it was a murder because that's what he was told. He's a Police Captain...

This is going to be a short fan fiction. I'm not planning on expanding this too long. As always reviews are welcome. Rated at PG-13. One The digital clock read 12:08am. Behind the sealed blinds on the windows of his office, Goldenrod City’s nightlife was bustling. The only light in...

This was a nice touching little story. I'll admit that the scenes transpired far too quickly for my liking. I'll try to help you with some sentence structure that I think could have used some improvement. You simply needed to imply that she stared at the monitor. No need for dialogue if she...

You seem to change the subject whenever it's about the past, why is that? I regret it at times. Do you consider yourself a pirate? No, not in the slightest, but we are viewed as a reminiscent of Team Aqua because our methods are similar. What role do you play on the ship? I'm third in...

This seems fun! I've been looking for questions to ask myself to help develop my characters. I'll do this with the protagonist of the fic I'm workin' on. I also added a few more questions that were asked to others that really resonated with this particular character. What is your full name...

Brock is one of the worst characters and that Jessie chick is just as bad. IMO

I like how you cleared things up, now I'm left questioning if there was way to explain that within the story. I like reading and writing anime canon fan fiction. And it can be tricky to write. It's hit or miss. Either readers agree with your on take on the canon, or they don't. That usually lies...

You have just opened the floodgates. At least for me. I wasn't planning on commenting, feeling my words would be a tad rude, but... This has to be the funniest pokemon fan fiction I've read in my life! This is good for a first fan-fiction. It's out of tune with the fandom, which makes it...

First drafts are always bad, but I wasn't aware of what you pointed out. Thanks, Cutlerine! I don't care what Eric's story is, as long as you keep that witty narrative voice leading me the rest of the story. That was very good.

Your story had nice description, but unfortunately your story suffers from what I like to call the overly mechanical plot syndrome. That is the plot of your story has been done thousands and thousands of times. There is no limit to how many of the same stories come out every year with the same...

Well it was pretty cool short little chapter. I did have one big problem with the story though and that is, why would we want to transform humans into pkmn, if humans can control pkmn? I'm sure humans can use pokemon for military applications as well. I feel that turning ordinary people, for the...

This is were you get creative! To some, Alder could in his fifties, maybe even sixties. To others he could even be in his twenties! If you want my opinion, I think Alder is fourty-seven, just a tad shy from his middle age, and Cynthia is thirty-four, still youthful, but full of experience...

I like May, she's my favorite character design of all-time. As far as advanceshipping goes, I guess I'm all for it. I'm not particularly fond of 'shippping' in general, but having Ash with May just feels right to me. I also really don't like to speculate. It's fun, but I perfer to look for...

This thing has been deleted and canceled.